Will you help me choose the first line of my new novel?

First, THANK YOU for your incredible support! I have worked nearly two years on The Beech Tree and getting it -- or even the first few lines -- in front of a writer like James Patterson could make the difference in whether it ever gets published. So, from the bottom of my heart, thank you.

Second, if you have not taken the opportunity to LIKE the post on Facebook, the link to do so is at the bottom of this post. Or click this hashtag on Facebook: ?#?JamesPattersonCritique?

Finally (literally), today is the FINAL DAY for posts so I promise not to pester you all with this again. Once more, though, your support is deeply appreciated.

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