Why Your Sales Emails Are Trash (And How to Fix Them)

Why Your Sales Emails Are Trash (And How to Fix Them)

Most sales emails fail because they come in hot with a big ask. Like a desperate stranger demanding 30 minutes of your life for a product you didn’t ask about.?

That’s not outreach. That’s an ambush.

If your emails aren’t getting replies, the problem isn’t your prospect. It’s you.


Stop Asking for Too Much, Too Soon

Nobody wakes up thinking, “Wow, I can’t wait to hop on a cold sales call today.”?

But you know what they might do? Click on a quick video. Skim a case study. Answer an easy question.

Lowering the bar to engagement is survival.

  • A hard pitch upfront is like proposing on the first date. Awkward, uncomfortable, and doomed.
  • A simple, low-commitment action? That’s how conversations actually start.
  • The smoother the path, the more likely they walk it.


AI Won’t Save You If You Sound Like a Robot

AI can crank out polished emails, personalize at scale, and automate follow-ups. But here’s the problem: people don’t trust bots.

  • If your email feels like a template, it’s getting ignored.
  • If you’re scraping data without consent, you’re just creepy.
  • If your automation lacks a human touch, you’re burning leads before they even consider you.

AI is a tool, not a replacement for trust. People buy from people, not algorithms.


Sales Emails Are Never "Done"

If your outreach strategy hasn’t changed in months, it’s probably dead. The best teams don’t just write emails. They stress-test them constantly.

  • What subject lines still work?
  • What follow-ups actually get responses?
  • What phrases trigger instant ghosting?

There’s no magic formula. No one-time fix. Just constant iteration. If your emails aren’t improving, they’re getting worse.


Want to write emails that actually get responses in the AI era? Check out this guide!

Chaz Correll

B2B Brand Builder & Revenue Generator

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Collin, your insights always hit the mark! It’s refreshing to see such clarity on effective outreach. Keep leading the charge with wisdom and wit from Predictable Revenue! Cheers from Canada!

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Collin Stewart

Helping companies build sales development teams.

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Learn more on how to be more creative with your emails in this human/ai era: https://predictable.fm/email-field-guide-2.0-landing

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Collin Stewart

Helping companies build sales development teams.

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Nobody wakes up thinking, “Wow, I can’t wait to hop on a cold sales call today.”? But you know what they might do? Click on a quick video. Skim a case study. Answer an easy question.

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