English Language Training This is where you will make mistakes quite often when you write an English test after a gap.

This is where you will make mistakes quite often when you write an English test after a gap.

1.??????Edit these sentences for grammar and punctuation.

(Look out for words that sound like each other or have similar – but not the same – meanings.)

How will Willard’s resignation affect the government's plans??

How will Willard’s resignation affect the government's plans??

How will Willard’s resignation affect the government plans??

How will Willard’s resignation affect the government's plans??

It's three years since I last have spoken French.

It's about three years since I have spoken French.

Assessment

I missed Public Names like government, police and so on

As time passes on, older people can easily find semantically related errors (effect/affect) as opposed to all the other errors(missed the common noun error).

Edit the paragraphs below for grammar, syntax, punctuation, and spelling. Rewrite parts where necessary:

Pre-Edit

The story starts with three women Mary, Marina and Meena, whom Raju had loved once. He invites all of them to visit his last performance. Raju starts performing in the circus. His school teacher, Mary continuously stares him. Looking at her, Raju reminds how he meets her. Raju falls down while skating when Mary comes and picks him up. In the class room, Raju is making fun of his new teacher and suddenly Mary appears. Raju gets scared after seeing Mary as his new teacher. In the next morning, Mary is teaching exercise to all students. But, Raju is not doing as his pant gets torn from behind. She takes Raju with her and sew his pant. She also asks Raju about his parents. He says that he has mother but he don't know about his father. Raju returns home and asks her mother about his father. She throws a clown toy and says that his father was a clown and died while performing in circus. Raju says he will also become a clown. But, his mother slapped him. As time passes, Raju gets infatuated towards his teacher Mary. While going for vacation, Raju gifts a clown to Mary and says it is him. After vacation, Raju see Mary with David and gets to know that they both love each other. Meanwhile, school principal rusticates Raju from school due to performing as a joker on road. Mary comes near him and invites him in her marriage. David gifts the clown return back to Raju and encourages him to be the same. Raju grown up and starts performing in a circus, where he meets a Russian women, Mariana and falls in love with her. He gifts Marina the old clown toy and says it is him. When Marina get to know about Raju's love, she refuses and moves back to Russia. She returns the clown back to Raju's mother. While seeing Raju's performance, his mother dies remembering his father's dead. Raju still performs in the circus.

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Post Edit

“Mera Naam Jocker Part Two”

The story starts with three women namely Mary, Marina, and Meena. Raju loved them in the past. He invites all of them to his event. Raju commences his performance in the circus. His school teacher, Mary was continuously staring at him. On seeing her, Raju goes nostalgic and started to think about their first meeting. Raju falls down while skating, and Mary rushes in to pick him up. In that classroom, Raju was making fun of his new teacher, and suddenly Mary appears there. Raju gets scared after seeing her and knowing that Mary is?his new teacher. The next day morning, Mary is teaching an exercise to all her students. But, Raju is not doing that as his pant (full trousers) got torn out in the rear side. She takes Raju with her and sews his torn full trouser.

She asks Raju about his parents. He said that he has a mother but he did not know about his father. Raju returns home and asks her mother about his father. She throws down a clown toy and says “ His father was a clown”, and died while performing an event in a circus. Raju says “He will also become a clown”. This made his mother angry and she slapped him. As time passes by, Raju gets infatuated with Mary. While going for a vacation, Raju gifts a clown to Mary, and says “it is him”.

After that vacation, Raju saw Mary along with David. He gets to know that they both love each other. Meanwhile, the school principal rusticates Raju from school, since he performed as a joker on the road. Mary comes near him and invites him into her marriage. David gifts the clown as a return gift back to Raju and encourages him to be the same.

Meanwhile, Raju had grown up well and started performing in a circus. This is where he meets a Russian woman, Mariana and again falls in love with her. He gifts Marina the old clown toy and says “it is him”. When Marina gets to know about Raju's love, she refuses and moves back to Russia. She returns the clown toy back to Raju's mother. While seeing Raju's performance, his mother dies remembering his father's death. Raju still performs in the circus without knowing that.

Raju left the circus and moved to a beach far away. He meets a beautiful girl Meena, who disguised herself as a boy, Meenan with her troupe. All of them start performing again on the road to earning. One day while performing; he gets to know that Meenan is a woman. He gets upset but then encourages Meena to perform as a woman dancer and not as a Male. They start singing and dancing in a theatre and he once again falls in love.

Raju gifts the same clown toy to Meena also. One day while performing on stage, she meets Kumar, who was a film hero. He offers Meena to be a heroine in his film. Meena comes to Mumbai, but Raju leaves Meena with Kumar and returned back to the first circus where he started performing.

He starts again performing in the circus. The story ends with the song “Jeena Yaha, Marna Yaha”. He starts to perform again in the circus. The story culminates with the song “Jeena Yahang, Marna Yahang ......”

“Mera Naam Jocker Part Two”

Assessment

I edited 540 words without tool support, and my final edit showed 25 errors. This could put your confidence down, believe me, this is the cost you pay for using better spell checkers with advanced suggestion lists.

Practice is the Key. That's why freshers just out of school are doing better than middle-aged people. They have fewer?errors and more practice but less subject and real-world knowledge to write.

Keep writing, keep practising, and you will at least be in the ring.

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