What it really means to be Clear, Accurate, Accessible and Unambiguous
Su Butcher
Social strategist, technical writer and facilitator at Just Practising Limited
Here’s a bag of Aberdeen Angus Steak Strips from Kings.
I know. Bear with me. It's August.
On the front of the packet in bold letters at both the top and the bottom it states:
81 calories per serve*
and
30g protein
Many people are looking to increase their protein intake for health reasons, and clearly the makers of this product know this. If like me you’re watching your protein intake, or your calorie intake, these numbers are important to you. I bought the packet because it said ‘30g protein’. I’ll take that.
After all I could do with eating 30g of protein.
If you’re observant, or a little bit sceptical, the questions you might be asking are,
Let’s look at the bag again.
On the cover there is an asterisk (*) next to the word ‘serve’.
On the back, under the nutritional information and details about where the product was made, it says,?
*this pack contains 2 servings.
So now we know that half the packet is 81 calories.?
But what about protein?
One might think that stating ‘30g protein’ next to ‘81 calories per serve*’ makes it likely that a serving is either 30g protein, or perhaps 15g protein (as the packet might be implied to be 30g protein in total and its two servings.
But no.
The bag is not 30g protein. Neither is a portion 30g protein.
Bogged down in the small print
If we look at the nutritional information, we can see that the nutritional information is given per 100g. This is convenient because it allows you to know what percentage of the product is protein.?
It turns out that the product is 30g protein PER 100g. i.e. 30 percent protein.
However, the bag is not 100g, it is only 60g.
So the whole bag is not 30g protein at all! It is only 60% of 30g, or 18g protein.
And a portion or serving will not be 30g either, it is only half a bag, or 9g protein.
Retrace our steps
Now I know that when the packet says:
81 calories per serve*
and
30g protein
It should actually say:
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30g protein per 100g
or
9g protein per serve*
or
30% protein.
You can imagine how many people buy a packet of Kings Aberdeen Angus Steak Strips thinking they are buying 30g protein.
Why am I talking about Steak Strips?
Let’s translate what we’ve learned about unhelpful, ambiguous and unclear marketing information on consumer products, into the construction products sector, and the world of building safety and sustainability.
What does this mean for Construction Products?
Many of you will know that I am not a huge fan of the ‘Code for Construction Product Information’ (CCPI) initiative. It is true, I’m not a fan. But its more nuanced than that.
What I’m not a fan of, is the approach and methodology of the CCPI, the way the intention has been enacted.
This is primarily because as a communications exercise and a business model, it is completely wrong – it uses exclusivity when it should be using open source, crowd sourced and free to access communications. You don’t change a whole industry culture by making an exclusive badge.
This is why I think ultimately as a vehicle for changing the culture of construction product information, it will fail, unless it gets some sort of significant overhaul.
Fair enough.
However, I don’t have a problem at all with the principle of the CCPI, also known as the ‘five acid tests’. These are that construction product information should be
“Clear, Accurate, Up-to-date, Accessible and Unambiguous”
Without clear, accurate, accessible and unambiguous construction product information,
Of course, we in the Plain Language Group would also argue that for this to happen safely and effectively, and to be 'up to date' as well, the product information must also be digitised.
How to be Clear, Accurate, Accessible and Unambiguous with Construction Products
What would make the selection of protein snacks fit these acid tests?
We know why the packet says 30g protein. It says it because the customer wants more protein.
We know why it says 81 calories. It says it because the customer wants fewer calories.
Does your marketing information present information this way?
When you are presenting construction product information, do you tell the specifier what they want to hear? Or do you tell them the truth?
Does your company present product information so that specifiers can compare it with other similar products, using the essential characteristics and their units as set out in harmonized standards?
Do you make it simple for specifiers to find the information they need?
If not, why not?
If you’d like some help working out whether your construction product information is as clear, accurate and unambiguous as it could be, get in touch.?
It isn’t just about the badge.
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BArch MRIAI, Director at ARCDOX
3 个月Always Read the Label. Nice one Su.
Servant Leader [delivering #DigitalConstruction]
3 个月Great work Su such an important perspective in a post-#Grenfell era. And, now that the transitional period [#BuildingSafetyAct] has ended - as of 06.04.24, its time to make the connection between the CCPI's '5 Acid Test(s)' and its relevance to the #goldenthread of #informationmanagement
Business Development & Technical Director at CSD Sealing Systems Ltd & CSD Technical Services Ltd
3 个月Great post showing how data can easily be misinterpreted. Unfortunately we regularly see cable transit produclts with conformity statements stating productd are EI60 rated but they conveniently forget to mention the cable transits require additional insulation fitted down the length of the cable to achieve EI60 rating. Be sure to check the certificated drawings carefully. This insulation detail is part of the certificated system! It is there for a reason ! If it is not fitted the system will fail allowing the spread of fire in less than 60 minutes!
"I don't know if we have a destiny, or if we're all just floatin' around accidental-like on a breeze, but I think maybe it's both. Maybe both is happenin' at the same time." Thanks to Forest Gump for these words.
3 个月Brilliant as always.
Principal Building Control Officer at London Borough of Camden
3 个月The elephant in the room, is statutory guidance clear,unambiguous and can deal with innovative products? I.e. not just saying they can be considered when trying to show compliance with the regulations. Construction products will be marketed at key selling criteria that is 'allowed' in the Approved Documents and will use imagery to suit! Testing is left to industry to deal with but due to IP what is actually disclosed to those who have to specify or check for their suitability?