What Lord of the Rings teaches us about first drafts

What Lord of the Rings teaches us about first drafts

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My 1970s editions of The Lord of the Rings

Even geniuses do terrible first drafts

Three things have collided. First, I am writing and rewriting and re-rewriting drafts of my new book. Regular readers will know that I shared the first draft with Kendra a number of weeks ago, and she came back with some great big picture insights and structural suggestions.

I took out the chainsaw. In the course of a few hours, my manuscript went from 22k words to just over 13k. That’s a lot of sunk cost, time, and effort, and wordsmithing that’s ended up as “paper” on my “floor.” But so it goes. You only get a great book (or most anything you create) by lots of creating and a great deal of fierce editing.

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Second, Amazon Prime recently released their pre-Lord of the Rings epic, reportedly the most expensive television series ever made. Third, and related to that, I was listening to one of my new favourite podcasts, The Rest is History, talking about J. R. R. Tolkein and the Middle Earth he imagined.

And in that podcast, I discovered that Frodo’s first-draft name was Bingo – Bingo! – while Aragorn, the returning king who is first introduced to us as Strider, was first-draft named Trotter.

Somehow “Bingo and Trotter Go Save the World” doesn’t seem like it would have really caught on.

J. R. R. Tolkein had some TERRIBLE names for his characters in his first draft. But he pulled it together – no doubt feedback from his friend C. S. Lewis over a pint of ale at the Eagle and Child pub would have helped - and did OK with what he finally produced.

Wherever you are in the work you’re doing, know that there’s every chance that this is currently a draft, and it will only get better.

What’s worth cutting out?

What’s worth keeping?

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Daniela Boyce

German Teacher | Neurolanguage Coach?

2 年

Oh my trotter and bingo! Could be an interesting brand though...not sure for what (yet). And yes, it is unbelievable how much J.R.R. Tolkien wrote/revised/left ((un)finished). Brilliant mind.

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Jonathan McCready

Team Dynamics helping customer-facing businesses create resilient and indestructible relationships. Got a people problem to solve? Book a complimentary call now!

2 年

Hmmm “The Coaching Hobbit” comes to mind ?? Michael Bungay Stanier

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Lisa Bragg

Helping Organizations Turn Invisible Excellence into Impact | Author of Bragging Rights | Speaker + Advisor

2 年

I think of it as it's not all lost, it was thought up and written down. It's just not for right now. I have pages and pages of notes that Kendra deleted tucked away for another time and place. I think though, that my thinking will have evolved again once I go back to take another look.

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Heather Frost

Developer of the Concept-of-Self (CoS) Scale | Accredited Coach & Team Coach | Visiting Tutor at Henley Business School | Doctorate Researcher | Co-Creator of Listening Lab

2 年

What was your Bingo or Trotter ?? Michael Bungay Stanier? I’m still smirking at the idea of those names….

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