For the want of a nail, a kingdom was lost



For a Comma, a Case Can Be Lost

Bapoo Malcolm


20 April 2017

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Judge David Barron had this to say. “For want of a comma, we have this case.”

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Language is the lawyer’s best weapon. It gets sharpened in the cut-and-thrust of intellectual battles in court. Those who shy away from the blood-letting, remaining ensconced in their offices, churning out page after page, inevitably submit to errors. The sharpening of claws is before a judge; because, finally, it is he who delivers the coup de grace, in the form of a judgement. A single word, misspelt or misplaced, can often mean the difference between a win and a loss. Or life and death.

 

It is said that the ex-minister, P Chidambaram, argued for two days, in the Supreme Court, over the positioning of a comma. While the outcome is not important, the value of a comma cannot be over-emphasised. 

 

Commas make interesting cases. 

 

A woman telegraphs her husband: “Have found wonderful bracelet. Price seventy-five thousand dollars. May I buy it?” Her alarmed husband replies, by telegram: “No, price too high.” The telegraph operator misses the comma after the word ‘No’, and the message now reads: “No price too high.” Elation, and her husband’s shock! He sues the telegraph company.

 

You be the judge. Would you allow such a demand?

 

The man won and, from that point on, telegraph rules required operators to spell out punctuation rather than use symbols. Remember the word—STOP—at the end of every sentence in telegrams? No price was too high to avoid the same mistake.

 

Commas had deadly effect when not used, or added, indiscriminately. Sir Roger Casement was hanged because a comma had been misinterpreted. The law then was unsure whether treason on foreign soil was actionable. A comma would have solved the problem. But it was missing and Sir Casement could not be freed. However, the court decided that a comma should be read in the unpunctuated, original, Norman-French text, crucially altering the sense; enough to convict Sir Roger.

 

Sir Casement was hanged, but his immortal last words gave way to the epigram, ‘Hanged by a comma’. 

 

Happy comma stories abound. ‘PARDON IMPOSSIBLE, TO BE SENT TO SIBERIA’ was purposely tampered to read, ‘PARDON, IMPOSSIBLE TO BE SENT TO SIBERIA’. Commas can make a life-and-death difference.

 

Non-macabre events also have ‘comma stories’. “Tropical fruit-plants for the purposes of propagation…” were not to be charged import duty. Mistakenly it read as “Tropical fruit, plants for the purposes of propagation…” thus allowing all tropical fruits to be imported into the US duty-free, the comma being read as ‘and’. The loss? A million dollars.

 

Back to Justice Barron. He had to decide on the rule that said, “... the protection of the overtime law does not apply to: The canning, processing, preserving, freezing, drying, marketing, storing, packing for shipment or distribution of…” The parties’ (drivers) dispute concerned the meaning of the words “packing for shipment or distribution.” A comma appearing after the word, ‘packing’, would mean ‘packing for both’. Otherwise, it would mean two different activities, one of packing and another of distribution.

 

You be the judge. Which interpretation would you prefer?

 

There is what is called ‘legal fiction’. It allows for equity. Equity, often, means ‘balance of convenience’. It asks: What was the intention of the law-makers (and their drafters)? In this case, the judgement sided with the drivers.

 

Specifically, if that exemption used a serial comma to mark off the last of the activities that it lists, then the exemption would clearly encompass an activity that the drivers perform. And, in that event, the drivers would plainly fall within the exemption and thus outside the overtime law’s protection. But, as it happens, there is no serial comma to be found in the exemption’s list of activities, thus leading to this dispute over whether the drivers fall within the exemption from the overtime law or not.”

 

PS. The author often has verbal tussles with the editor over the overuse of commas. He now rests his case.


 

 

Vinu K Parida

Learning and unlearning act concurrently in the process of growth. Ex Member, State Consumer Redressal Commission.

5 年

Respected sir, your article reminded me of my teacher of business communication in 1994. My initial education and experience has been in business management and marketing but subsequently transition happened to law. Legal studies changed my point of view about life. I am blessed to read this article.

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Harshit Kabali

Partner, Coatwala Kabali & Co.

5 年

Bapoo M Malcolm respected sir, in this enthralling article, which speaks on the extremely sensitive issue of punctuation errors and their legal repercussions, there is a citation of an example which states the husband telegrammed the wife - No, price too high, wherein what was telegrammed was No price too high ; granted that the grammatical error was on part of the telegrammer, but shouldn't it be the joint liability of the sender to ensure the punctuation mark was put in. Also "No price too high" would be incorrect English and a very unclear statement, unless accompanied by an exclamation mark, which would read "No price too high!". Hence my respectful submission is that perhaps the telegram law wouldn't have beeen amended had the telegrammer employed a better, more distinguished professional, as you have mentioned in many comments.

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Santosh Kumar Pandey

Chief Executive Officer at Sarthak Advocates & Solicitors

5 年

Terrific. Can't resist to quote, ' ??????? ?? ??? ??? ??? ???? ???? ?? ???? ?? ??

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