Tumsi Furu Prakseri... | too many thoughts ...

Tumsi Furu Prakseri... | too many thoughts ...

Find English article below the poem


Dan wan momenti de

Tak’ mi ede wani gwewe ala sei

Omeni prakseri e feti fu feni wan presi

Na ini mi ati

Na ini mi ede


Feti nanga makandra

Feti fu feni wan presi

Fu tan

Ma, ,,,

a no ala kan tan

So lesi

Ala e lasi

Ifu mi no pruberi fu tan hori

Den gwe

Den gwe


Ala den bun prakseri

Den idee

Den denki

Den puwema

Den poku

Den odo

Nanga ala fasi fu feni wan oplossing

Gi ala den probleem a tapu na gron


Ala e gwe

Fa mi kan ori yu

Ofa mi kan kibri yu


Tan dya mi prakseri

Mi idee

Tan

Tan

Tan

....

Raj ElJal wan leri-boi fu Kabir, a fisi man fu patata


Too many thoughts?

There are moments when your thoughts feel like a storm, scattered and restless, pulling you in every direction at once. Your mind races, searching for something solid—a place to stand, a moment of calm—but the harder you try to grasp it, the more elusive it seems. It’s as if your heart and mind are locked in a quiet struggle, each trying to lead, each trying to find clarity amidst the noise. You might feel the weight of questions with no answers, an urgency to move forward, but no clear path to take. It’s in this swirling chaos, this fragile space, that your inner world begins to shape the story of what comes next.


Finding Ground Amid Chaos: A Reflection on Resilience and Creativity


In moments of uncertainty, when the mind feels adrift, we often need to turn inward to find clarity. The poem, written in the vibrant language of Sranan Tongo, seeks to capture this universal struggle—of holding on to our inner strength while grappling with the weight of external challenges. Its themes—resilience, creativity, and the search for meaning in turbulent times—speak to the heart of human experience.


In 2022, amidst the Covid-19 measures, it felt as though everything we had built—Get!T, relationships with friends and family, trust—began collapsing with alarming speed. If my mind often races like a Formula 1 car, then during this period it was spinning wildly on a track without guardrails. Every thought competed for attention, and every decision felt like a life-or-death lap around an unrelenting circuit. The clarity I desperately sought seemed perpetually just out of reach, lost somewhere in the storm of uncertainty.


There are moments in life when this feeling becomes all too familiar.

The sense of being overwhelmed, as if your thoughts are speeding ahead faster than you can keep up, resonates deeply during times of uncertainty or rapid change. It’s in these moments—when everything feels like it’s slipping out of control—that the search for clarity becomes both a necessity and a challenge.

These experiences remind us that chaos isn’t something to overcome with brute force but something to navigate with patience, resilience, and a willingness to pause and reflect.


I will share personal feelings and how I’ve overcome moments of despair and found the strength to keep moving forward. These are the times when everything seemed to crumble—when trust was shaken, relationships were strained, and the foundation of what I believed in felt unstable. In those moments, I didn’t have all the answers; I only had the weight of uncertainty and the quiet hope that clarity would come. What did help a lot were philosophy, values, tools and skills. It is important to be prepared. I hope to share insights about these so you can better prepare for your moments in the future of despair and seemingly totally lost. We all fight our own demons, we all have to walk our own paths, and hopefully we can all make better sense of the solutions hidden inside of us.


Through reflection, vulnerability, and a willingness to confront my fears, I began to rebuild— slow steps ... Not externally, but within myself. Neither a straight path, nor was it easy, but every step taught me something about resilience, connection, and the power of leaning into discomfort.

By sharing these journeys, I hope to offer a glimpse into experiences, and a reminder that even in our darkest moments, there is always a way to rediscover light and purpose.


and now .... according to chatgpt evaluating the poem

The Heart and Mind in Battle

The opening lines, “Tak’ mi ede wani gwewe ala sei / Omeni prakseri e feti fu feni wan presi,” immediately set the tone. Here, the poet describes a mental storm—thoughts scattering in all directions while the heart and mind wrestle to find peace. This imagery resonates deeply with those who have faced moments of inner conflict, where clarity seems elusive, and solutions feel out of reach.

Yet, amidst this internal chaos lies a quiet strength: the determination to search for a “presi” (place) where balance can be restored. This is not a passive longing but an active fight—a “feti” (struggle)—that unfolds both within and in collaboration with others.


The Power of Togetherness

The poem’s call for unity, “Feti nanga makandra” (struggle together), is a poignant reminder that solutions often arise through collective effort. In a world increasingly marked by individualism, the poet emphasizes that shared experiences and mutual support are essential for navigating life’s complexities. This echoes the wisdom of indigenous communities, where interconnectedness is a cornerstone of survival and harmony.

Sorry ChatGpt, this was meant to explain that thoughts fight for their place in the mind, the heart, the soul and the memory...

Even so, the poet acknowledges a sobering reality: “A no ala kan tan” (not all can stay). Change and loss are inevitable, and not all endeavors will succeed. Yet, the act of trying, of “proberi fu tan ori” (attempting to hold on), is itself a testament to resilience.


Creativity as a Path Forward


The poem shifts its focus to the wellspring of human ingenuity: “Den idee / Den denki / Den puwema / Den poku / Den odo.” Here, the poet lists the diverse ways we channel our thoughts into creation—through ideas, poems, music, and proverbs. These forms of expression are not mere distractions but tools for understanding and solving the “probleem” (problems) we face.


This is where the poem’s heart lies: in the belief that solutions are born from creativity and collaboration. The poet urges us to use every resource, every mode of thinking, to address challenges on both personal and collective levels.


Letting Go and Moving Forward


“Ala e gwe” (everything goes), the poet reminds us. This refrain encapsulates the transient nature of life. Whether it’s thoughts, ideas, or struggles, nothing stays forever. The poet poses a deeply personal question: “Fa mi kan ori yu? Ofa mi kan kibri yu?” (How can I hold or protect you?) This could be addressed to a loved one, a fleeting thought, or even an ideal.


Despite the inevitability of change, the closing lines, “Tan dya mi prakseri / Mi idee / Tan,” reflect a quiet resolve. Even as the world shifts, the act of thinking, of creating, of being, remains.


Lessons for Today’s World


This poem holds profound lessons for individuals and communities alike:

1. Resilience Through Reflection: In times of turmoil, taking a moment to reflect can ground us. The poet’s imagery reminds us that clarity begins within.

2. The Strength of Unity: Whether through teamwork, shared creativity, or mutual support, collective efforts amplify our ability to find solutions.

3. The Power of Expression: Ideas, art, and culture are not just outlets but vital tools for problem-solving and growth.

4. Acceptance of Change: While the loss of control can be daunting, embracing the impermanence of life can free us to focus on what truly matters.


Conclusion


This Sranan Tongo poem is a tribute to the enduring human spirit. It invites us to embrace creativity, lean on one another, and find strength in the face of uncertainty. Above all, it reminds us that even in moments of chaos, there is always a way to “fen wan oplossing”—to find a solution. The path may not always be clear, but with resilience, unity, and creativity, we can navigate the storms of life and uncover new ground.


Maybe ChatGpt found some parts in the unconscious mind... In the newsletter series of both my self and Get!T Talent & Organizational Development we strive to Humanize as much as possible.
Reina Kolf-Telgt BBA

Business Development Advisor through TMA Method, LDD, Diversity and Inclusion, HumanHeart coach, HumanHeartManagent, FFF Approach and around 40 years Organizational experience

1 个月

Heel mooi Ray Jong In mijn comment op een andere post vroeg ik om het gedicht en met deze post krijg ik meer dan waar ik om vraag, nice!

Christel Nijman

Delivery Manager at Qualogy Caribbean

1 个月

Food for thought!

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