Sharing Disciplined Storytelling with Those Who Inspired My Journey
Boston, circa August 2024

Sharing Disciplined Storytelling with Those Who Inspired My Journey

Introduction:

The journey towards mastering storytelling—both as an art and a discipline—begins early. The moment captured in the photograph with George Whitfield Ph.D and Dr. Leo Aldianto circa August 2024 in Boston, marks a pivotal reflection on how storytelling evolves, drawing from years of experience, practice, and collaboration. This article examines into my personal reflections, connecting them with theoretical perspectives and the broader cultural ecosystem of education, to explore how storytelling, rooted in discipline and mindfulness, shapes entrepreneurial thinking.

Personal Reflection:

Looking back, my journey into storytelling started far earlier than I realized. Growing up in a competitive academic environment in Jakarta, the value of a disciplined mind was instilled in me from a young age. My father's words, "I don’t provide you money, but I provide you knowledge through books," echo in my mind even today. The hours spent in libraries (elementary, junior high, and Smandel's school library, LIPI Round Building's library, Kebayoran Baptist church's library, my rich friend's library), borrowing them (and returning for sure), and reading during any available moments (either in KRL train, metro-mini, minibus, while attending my mom's shop, while waiting for piano lesson, during contemplation time after school and after Maghrib) shaped my worldview. This foundation of curiosity and disciplined thinking has deeply influenced the way I teach, write, and lead today.

In my role as a co-learner, the critical role of storytelling became even more apparent. I vividly recall an early teaching experience where storytelling became a focal point in the classroom. I had spent hours preparing a lecture on the role of ecosystems in entrepreneurship, filled with data and analysis. Yet, as I began speaking, I realized the students were disengaged. Something was missing. It wasn’t until I shared a personal story about a failed venture I had experienced early in my career that the room came alive. The data suddenly had meaning because it was attached to a narrative. This experience was a turning point for me; it showed that storytelling wasn’t just an accessory to teaching but a central component of it.

Today, I continue to see the value of storytelling in my work with students. Those who once struggled with the concept of market validation now grasp it more fully when framed through real-world stories. These stories, often about resilience, failure, and learning, offer students a deeper understanding of the entrepreneurial process. This aligns with insights I shared in The Jakarta Post (Tambun, 2024b), where storytelling, especially for introverts, becomes a platform to transform internal reflections into powerful expressions that influence the classroom and beyond. Through storytelling, students move from conscious incompetence to conscious competence, eventually leading with clearer communication.

Theoretical Framework:

One key framework that informs Disciplined Storytelling is Vygotsky’s theory of social constructivism, which posits that knowledge is co-constructed through social interactions (Vygotsky, 1978). Storytelling serves as a medium for that knowledge transfer, bridging gaps between cognitive development and social understanding. Patrick Winston’s insights remind us that the ability to tell a compelling story is one of the most powerful ways to communicate ideas effectively. Storytelling becomes not just a narrative tool, but a means of scaffolding thoughts and ideas in the minds of others.

Moreover, writing ability—another key component Winston emphasized in his book Make It Clear—plays a crucial role in refining those stories. In his book, he argues that writing is not merely a technical skill but a method of improving the clarity of ideas. The process of writing, revising, and refining forces us to sharpen our thoughts. As Winston highlighted, great storytellers are also great writers. This principle is evident in entrepreneurship education as students learn not only to tell their stories but also to articulate them clearly and persuasively through writing (Winston, 2021).

The integration of mind mapping, a tool popularized by Tony Buzan, plays a significant role in helping students visually organize their ideas and narratives (Buzan & Buzan, 1995). Mind mapping helps students build coherent stories by breaking down complex ideas into structured visual formats. This technique aligns perfectly with the disciplined practice of storytelling, which emphasizes thoughtful preparation and idea clarity before delivery.

In my recent research (Tambun, Yudoko, & Aldianto, 2024), I explored how the Disciplined Storytelling framework significantly impacted students’ communication skills. Our findings showed that structured communication, especially among introverts, enhanced both the depth of analysis and the ability to articulate complex ideas. This study reaffirmed my belief that storytelling and writing must be nurtured as foundational skills for effective communication, regardless of a student’s personality type.

Cultural Context:

In the broader cultural context, Disciplined Storytelling extends beyond individual practice to become a cornerstone of entrepreneurial education. Collaborating with educators like George Whitfield and Dr. Leo Aldianto has shown how storytelling can be woven into the fabric of a university’s entrepreneurship programs. In Indonesian culture, where oral traditions have long held sway, storytelling is deeply rooted, yet the discipline behind it is often overlooked (Geertz, 1961).

Patrick Winston’s work on the quality of ideas is relevant here. Storytelling and writing are crucial, but the quality of the ideas being communicated is what ultimately determines the impact (Winston, 2021). In entrepreneurship education, the ability to tell a story or write well is meaningless if the underlying idea lacks depth, creativity, or value. My book argues that the first 12 years of education play a critical role in shaping the quality of ideas students later develop. It’s during this period that synaptic firings—those 'sparkling moments'—form the foundation of mental models that students rely on as they enter higher education and beyond (Tambun, 2024a).

Furthermore, Bandura’s theory of self-efficacy (1977) complements this idea by highlighting that the belief in one's ability to succeed influences how students approach tasks, including storytelling. As students build confidence in their storytelling abilities through disciplined practice, they are more likely to achieve higher levels of performance.

Through my work in entrepreneurship education, I have sought to integrate storytelling and writing into the curriculum as not just artistic endeavors but skills that demand the same rigor and practice as any other discipline. In the corporate-backed, university-based entrepreneurship models we’ve been developing, storytelling, writing, and the quality of ideas become vehicles for innovation, allowing students to communicate complex concepts in ways that resonate with diverse audiences, from investors to customers.

In The Jakarta Post article "Tools for introverts in education: A paradigm shif", I also emphasized that the educational system, particularly in Indonesia, tends to favor extroverted communication styles. In contrast, I argued that introverted students can excel by leveraging storytelling and other structured communication techniques to express their ideas (Tambun, 2024b). This shift is not just beneficial for the students themselves but contributes to a more inclusive and diverse learning environment.

Finally, Kahneman’s distinction between fast and slow thinking, as outlined in Thinking, Fast and Slow (2011), helps us understand the role of mindfulness in storytelling. Slow thinking encourages deliberate reflection and careful crafting of narratives, which is key to the disciplined practice of storytelling. This deliberate thinking process helps students move away from impulsive storytelling towards more thoughtful and impactful communication.

Conclusion:

Storytelling, writing ability, and the quality of ideas—these elements form the foundation of effective communication in education and entrepreneurship. As Patrick Winston emphasized, storytelling is about structure, clarity, and the ability to leave an enduring impact. Writing sharpens those stories, while the quality of the ideas being communicated is what ultimately drives change.

Storytelling, when practiced with discipline, becomes a powerful tool for shaping minds and fostering entrepreneurial thinking. It is not an overnight skill but one developed through years of mindful reflection, practice, and knowledge development. The stories we tell today are built on the mental models formed in our earliest years of education, continually refined through practice and collaboration with others.

As I stand with George Whitfield and Dr. Leo Aldianto in the photo, holding Disciplined Storytelling, I am reminded that every story has a foundation, built not just on talent, but on disciplined practice, thoughtful reflection, and a commitment to continuous learning.

References

Bandura, A. (1977). Self-efficacy: Toward a unifying theory of behavioral change. Psychological Review, 84(2), 191–215.

Buzan, T., & Buzan, B. (1995). The Mind Map Book: Radiant Thinking. BBC Books.

Geertz, H. (1961). The Javanese family: A study of kinship and socialization. Waveland Press.

Kahneman, D. (2011). Thinking, fast and slow. Farrar, Straus and Giroux.

Tambun, T., Yudoko, G., & Aldianto, L. (2024). Evaluating the impact of disciplined storytelling on student communication skills: Integrating cultural sensitivities in educational interventions. The International Journal of Business & Management, 12(7), 1–10.

Tambun, T. (2024a). Disciplined storytelling? Co-learn with my students. Amazon KDP.

Tambun, T. (2024b). Tools for introverts in education: A paradigm shift. The Jakarta Post. Retrieved from: [https://lnkd.in/g9dm-dwU](https://lnkd.in/g9dm-dwU)

Vygotsky, L. S. (1978). Mind in society: The development of higher psychological processes. Harvard University Press.

Winston, P. H. (2021). Make it clear: Speak and write to persuade and inform. MIT Press.


PERSONAL NOTE on autoethnographic practice: The article aligns with the general structure and requirements of an autoethnographic work. 

1. Personal Reflection: The article provides a detailed narrative about your personal experiences and development as an educator, particularly related to storytelling, emphasizing both early life influences and professional growth.
  
2. Theoretical Framework: The piece integrates theoretical frameworks, including Vygotsky's social constructivism and Patrick Winston’s theories on storytelling and writing. Other references to Bandura, Buzan, and Kahneman also ground the reflections in relevant academic theories.

3. Cultural Broader Context: The article discusses the cultural context of education, particularly in Indonesia, drawing connections between cultural practices and storytelling’s role in education and entrepreneurship.

4. Thick Narrative: It includes thick descriptions of classroom experiences, collaborations, and the development of your storytelling methods, adding depth to personal reflections.

5. Self and Society: The reflection on storytelling's impact on both personal and societal levels (i.e., in educational systems and entrepreneurship) fits the autoethnographic focus on how personal experiences connect to broader cultural or societal issues.

The article is sufficiently reflective, theoretical, and rooted in a broader social context, confirming its alignment with autoethnographic principles.        



Farchan Muhammad

Master of Biotechnology | Universitas Gadjah Mada | Scholar, Fighter, E-sport Player

6 天前

Really interesting insight about storytelling! I once told to my XL Future Leaders menteri in 2022 that "storytelling is the pinnacle of public speaking", turns out it was right all along, proven by your articles??. I will always cherish the moment of your compliment in final exam: "you are a good Storyteller" ??

Robert Rupp

/amplified introvert/ np. Silent screams from a whispering bullhorn. An oxymoron.

2 个月

Interesting topics! How do you see these three areas intersecting in your work or research?

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Mark Sloan (FGS)

Senior/Principal Geoscientist, Prospect Generator and dedicated oil and gas, finder and developer: International & Browse Basin Specialist

2 个月

Interesting read Toronata Tambun!! Thanks for sharing. I totally agree with you! Story telling is a very effective form of communication in education and business. In my formative years I had a history teacher that brought history alive for me by storying telling the great myths and legends of Irish Celtic folklore. It seems as if I was a good student because in my last technical meeting in Istanbul, a listener to my presentation said, 'he's a geologist, we can definitely expect good stories from him!!' I had a good heartly laugh, but without 'stories' the great oilfields of the world would never have been found!!

Panji Mukadis

Lecturer, Doctor's Degree Student at SBM ITB, Blogger; Blogging on Multiple Platforms

2 个月

Thank you for sharing, Prof. Did you happen to write any paper with autoethnography method?

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Thank you pak Irfan Zen for finding time reading at my humble article in the midst of your busy weekend. Thanks Nicholas Sidharta and Hapsari Amalia Difa Santosa, Thanks Teguh Fredyansyah from IPMI

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