Script Coverage on a TV pilot

David Ennocenti David Ennocenti

David Ennocenti

Freelance Writer at self

发布日期: 2017年11月17日
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I just submitted the first ten pages of a TV drama pilot for coverage. The feedback i received was a bundle of contradictions. This from a professional who works for HBO.

The feedback basically was I started with too much revealed in the beginning. Then the same with the second scene. Then the third scene dragged too much. The "professional" rated 3 out of 5 for the "set up of the world" that the show is supposed to take place in. The feedback was totlally contradictory and completely useless.

Maybe that's why there are 4,000 stations to choose from and nothing good to watch! At least that what people tell me. Many are cancelling TV subscriptions.

I'm curious, what do others think about feedback they receive on their work. In addition, It is the ONLY sub par critique I have ever received and it's one script I revised and edited more than any other. While it was only the first ten pages it was full of contradictions. Too much too soon, not enough explained?????? What?






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