Not Quite There

Not Quite There

   Steve is working hard to make his life better. His family supports his efforts and are there for him when he needs them. It's never been easy though. Steve has been through a lot. He's hoping his roommates, Jamal and Tony will be motivated by his efforts. It's one day at a time.   I applaud that the author is trying to do here. 

   I did find issues. The book reads very rough. It's not a smooth flow of words. It doesn't seem to capture the attitude of someone going through the problems Steve has. It seems to jump around from subject to subject. Ar. Also, the narrator seems to be speaking down to the reader.

  I gave this one 2 cheers out of 5 for the issues above.

copy of book provided by author and I voluntarily reviewed it.

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