A Practical Guide: The Art of Storytelling in Business Presentations
Renato Pelissaro
Fractional Chief Marketing Officer at Chief Outsiders I Ex-Microsoft, McKinsey, PayPal
Many professionals, even those armed with high-quality data and well-researched insights, struggle to make an impact when presenting their findings. They walk into a room with compelling statistics, well-designed slides, and a clear recommendation—yet stakeholders lose interest, the message gets lost in the details, and decisions get delayed or dismissed.
This isn’t a failure of analysis. It’s a failure of storytelling.
I’ve seen this dynamic play out countless times. Especially in consulting, success often depends not just on having the right answer but on selling that answer in a way that resonates. Consulting firms have mastered the art of packaging insights into compelling narratives, making even the most complex problems feel solvable. Many times, the solutions we presented were already known to internal teams, yet they weren’t gaining traction. The difference? We weren’t just presenting data—we were telling a story that made people care, inspired action, and aligned stakeholders toward a common goal.
That’s the real power of storytelling in business: it transforms information into momentum. A great data story doesn’t just inform; it persuades, aligns, and mobilizes. So how can you craft presentations that don’t just share insights but drive real decision-making?
Based on my experience and some of the best practices I’ve seen in both consulting and business leadership, here are key strategies to make your presentations more compelling:
1. Start with a clear slide argument structure
The?pyramid principle?(which is called this way because it starts with a very specific idea on the top and opens up in more details as you go down the slide, in the shape of a pyramid) is a foundational framework for structuring presentations. It ensures that your message is clear, logical, and easy to follow, with each slide making complete sense on its own. The idea is to start with a single governing thought in the title and then support it with key arguments and evidence.
As you can see from the examples above, the governing thought (title) idea is supported by the arguments, which are supported by the evidences presented, making the conclusion hard to refute.
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2. Build a logical sequence of slides: the argument build-up
A logical argument is a powerful way to structure your presentation, especially when you need to persuade your audience. It’s a chain of reasoning where each slide builds on the previous one, leading to a clear conclusion.
Here’s how to structure a logical argument:
This structure ensures that your audience can follow your reasoning as you continue the story, and understand why your conclusion is the logical next step.
3. Emphasize key points
Your audience won’t remember everything you say, so it’s crucial to highlight the most important points. Use?placement, repetition, and sentence structure?to draw attention to your key ideas.
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4. Use connectors to guide your audience
Transitions are the glue that holds your story together. They help your audience follow your logic and understand how one point connects to the next. Use phrases like “therefore,” “however,” and “as a result” to signal shifts in your argument. You can also echo key terms or ideas from earlier sections to create a seamless flow.
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5. Keep it simple and clear
Avoid jargon, overly complex sentences, and unnecessary details. Your goal is to make your message as clear and accessible as possible. Use?active voice, precise language, and concrete examples to keep your audience engaged.
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6. End summarizing key conclusions and with a strong call to action
Your conclusion should summarize all the key messages discussed during the presentation and then finish with a strong call to action. This ensures that your audience leaves with a clear understanding of what needs to happen next.
It takes some practice. For most people, this way of structuring presentations is not natural because they have been doing them in a different way for a long time. One last tip is working on a document to create a draft script before jumping straight to presentation software (MS Office, Google Slides, and others). You will see that over time it becomes more and more natural, and most important, when you shift from simply sharing data to crafting a story, you do more than report findings—you shape decisions. And that’s what great business storytelling is all about.
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Chief Marketing & Comms Officer @ Actinver | Marketing Strategy Expert. Ex-PayPal, Nestle
1 周You are one of the best storytellers I’ve ever met!
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2 周Thought your point about repetition was fascinating - feel like as data storytellers, we often underestimate the value of reinforcing a key point in slightly different ways throughout our stories - but it works super well!
You have always delivered truly exceptional presentations! You have a rare talent for capturing attention, making complex ideas clear, and keeping your audience engaged from start to finish. Your confidence, storytelling, and delivery make every session both insightful and inspiring.