Portal to fear...
The Dark Angel awaits.....

Portal to fear...

I am relasing my website to the world, and would love for you to drop on in and look around. My site will highlight my current releases "The Becoming Part One" and "The Becoming Part Two" and give you a preview into my soon to release book:

Blood Bath - The Blood Countess died nearly 200 years ago, interned for eternity, punishment for torturing and murdering young women. Now her soul has been released, and she seeks revenge on the last living person who holds the power to release her into the world of the living.

Andrew Stark Mysteries: https://www.andrewstarkmysteries.com


Loretta Leslie

LorLes Editing - your work, the best it can be

7 年

I really like the look of the website. Dark, like your tales. The Books page is well done and the synopses are strong. Books should come before future releases though. I know it's under construction but it would be good if you could remove the generic web prompts like on the blog and testimonials page. These also feature on the home page. The sooner you get a blog and a testimonial up there the better. A good way to drive people to your blog is to review other books, interview authors and write pertinent blogs on writing. The Grab a Copy and Make an Appointment links didn't work on the iPad. Neither did Gallery from the More menus. Not sure what make an appointment is for. Where does Grab a Copy link to? You need to think about which market will pay the best and drive sales to it. In terms of the menu, I'd move about us down one and have books showing after home, or move the make an appointment button, at least, so more menus options show. There is no where to link to Facebook, twitter, LinkedIn, Google + or whichever social media you are on. You'll be promoting your blogs through there so people need to be linked. There could be a promotions page where you run a giveaway competition if people sign up to your email list. That assumes hard copies, of course. Hope that helps.

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