Poem: You Couldn't Take the Roses

Poem: You Couldn't Take the Roses


When you left

I thought you took

everything-

my heart, the future,

my child's joy, my home

the family I loved...

Even my name

was ripped from me

and handed to another

(slightly worse for wear.)

But you couldn't take the roses,

or my coffee in the morning.

Your lies couldn't break

moonlight walks, or music.

The birds still sang.

My faith grew stronger,

my heart bolder,

and I learned to dance

without

your arms around me.

And in the end,

the love I thought was dead-

the love I thought you carried away with you

(like a hated clinging vine

fastened to your sweater)

grew green and lush

in another garden

and bloomed

in the starlight

when you were gone.


Copyright 2011, Lisa Morris Snell

This poem is now available for non-exclusive publication. Have a wonderful weekend!

Larry M. Binion

Published Author at Amazon

7 年

Wonderful! I am so glad you found happiness. i used to worry about you!

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Mary Therese O'Leary

Home tutor English, Irish, history and mathematics 2019. Teaching in Ireland only.

7 年

The ending is so hopeful most breakup poems are not like this. Impressive effort:)

David Wertman

Celtic Programer at WSLR 96.5FM

7 年

Lisa, I always enjoy your work Maybe another one for my radio show???Dave…

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