A Patch of Blue

Man carrying the weight of the world

Winter in my part of the world is usually our wettest season, which means that grey-sky days are more frequent than during the rest of the year. Not seeing the sun for more than a day in a place where sunshine is the norm can be hard on the soul... Here is a poem I wrote that described the experience of seeing a break in the clouds after a series of overcast winter days.

A PATCH OF BLUE
Grey skies had bowed my head:
Weighed down by heavy clouds
Unbroken to the horizon,
Crushed by unrelenting dullness
Slowly rolling overhead
And closing in my soul
To a single plane –?
Oppressively narrow;
Monotone –?
Bringing me to my knees.

I prayed for relief,
Eyes tight shut against the view
As if to sleep and forget.

A subtle shift in the air
Startled me awake, alert.
Peering upward for its source,
A rend in the sky-cover
Revealed the endless heaven beyond,
Bright with possibility.

15 June 2021


Lori V.

Angel/Spirit Communications, Ancestral Healings

3 年

This is wonderful. ?? Makes one want to roll over and get out of bed. Oh, and thanks for the tissues...????

Paulette McCormack - CAHRI, MAHRM, MER

Employment Relations Consultant | Seeking opportunities to engage with Small Business Owners | Law Student | Seeker of Knowledge | Passionate about business development

3 年

So good - hope you are tracking along ok

Sarah Denholm

Confident, Engaging & Influential Speaking Training and Coaching | Public Speaking | Presentation Skills | Intentional Influence Skills | Executive Speaking Coach | Speaker | Professional Pianist

3 年

This is lovely Neville: and the last line truly uplifting. The combination of words, put so simply, is wonderful. Highly relevant at the moment too, as Melbourne enters 5th lockdown and the rain comes down. A lot of 'down'! So looking up is freeing. Thank you.

Daniel Paice ???

Award-winning writer making it up as he goes along.

3 年

Very thought-provoking! I really felt the feelings of isolation, oppression and entrapment. ??

Neville Starick

Empowering you with ?? tools, strategies and confidence to create and live YOUR prosperous life.

3 年

Divan, Sarah, Dee, Sara Miriam, Daniel - As poetry aficionados, I thought you might like to read this one...

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