Mr. Grey pays a visit!

Mr. Grey pays a visit!

"Knock, knock knock!"

I wasn't expecting anybody. Who could it be? I unlock the door and open it a crack.


I see a non-descript man. I shut the door, he's been here before.


"Knock, knock, knock!". They are firmer this time. I sigh, going to be one of those days.


I open the door wide enough to let the old friend in.


He strides past and makes himself at home.


"You've cleaned this dump up." I half smile. He continues in his monotone voice. "Nice to see you."


I wish I could say the same. I don't care for Mr. Grey. He comes into my space and sucks all the joy out of me and the space. I try to avoid his gaze and certainly his touch.


"Aren't you going to offer me a drink?"


I really didn't want this to be a long visit. I stare at him blandly.


"Never mind, I know my way around."


He strides methodically to the kitchen. I don't bother to follow.


Soon I hear banging, crashing and slamming. Some foul mouthed utterances. "This won't do. This is much too cheerful in here."


I feel joy leaving my body. Why? Why today? I was doing so good.


"Knock-knock-knock!" I leap to the door, but Mr. Grey beats me there.


All I can see is a light. Bright and warm.


"Sorry, we are not interested." says the cold voice of Mr. Grey.


"But I am interested." I squeak out. Mr. Grey shoots me a look.


The light grows brighter.


"Can I come in?" says the warm voice. Although I don't immediately recognize the voice, it comforts me.


Mr. Grey shrinks.


In strides a luminous being. Feet barely touching the ground. Her presence changes the dynamic.


I can tell that Mr. Grey isn't pleased, but then again he never is.


I feel better, like it's going to be all right. Mr. Grey will not win today!

Rochelle Heath-Harris

Word Wizard | Editor | Proofreader |Strategic Content Creator

5 个月

I love this Steve Elliot DTM!! I wasn't sure when I signed up for this but I'm already a fan. It's wonderful!!

要查看或添加评论,请登录

Steve Elliot DTM的更多文章

  • From the bad, comes good!

    From the bad, comes good!

    My sweaty hands grip the steering wheel. My knuckles are white with stress and my grip grows tighter.

    3 条评论
  • "A Second Chance at Fortune"

    "A Second Chance at Fortune"

    I crack the cookie with excitement. My 12 year old fingers frantically flying to find the fortune.

    7 条评论
  • Unfamiliar Familiarity

    Unfamiliar Familiarity

    Knock, knock knock! My hand raps the wooden door. I'm not sure this was a good idea coming here.

    3 条评论
  • Perfect Card, Imperfect Place!

    Perfect Card, Imperfect Place!

    So that's where it was. I am shocked, surprised and saddened.

    6 条评论
  • A Grape Team

    A Grape Team

    One day out in the field a conversation was had. It centered around a grapevine plant.

    2 条评论
  • Soundtrack to a Road Trip

    Soundtrack to a Road Trip

    The music blared over the wind. Road trips were best with a soundtrack and mine was filled with pulse driving, beat…

    2 条评论
  • Tools of Learning

    Tools of Learning

    He stood nervously swaying from side to side. His sweaty palms gripping the dog eared pages.

    4 条评论
  • Timeless

    Timeless

    The steam rose from the cup in a swirl. The man lifted the cup of morning fuel as he called it.

    6 条评论
  • Journal of Dating

    Journal of Dating

    "Do you journal?" The question is posed in a kind and thoughtful way. I pause to think.

    12 条评论
  • Everything has a Purpose

    Everything has a Purpose

    He wiped the sweat off his brow and placed the straw hat back on his head. He rocked the chair gently.

    13 条评论

社区洞察

其他会员也浏览了