Left Alone

Left Alone

He was the one every fall who refused to trim his trees. No one in our neighborhood liked him; regretfully including myself. One day nearing fall’s arrival I walked up his walkway and knocked.

It took him awhile to answer. Sir I said fall’s just about here and I’d like to know why you don’t trim your trees, especially this one by your door. He kind of looked me up and down and then he said some things are better off left alone. Young lady, in time you’ll know why, now go away and don’t come back till you do.

Fall started slow that year; raking was an on and off thing. In between all of us with our rakes and bags had a chance to watch everything change for a change without wind in our faces. That was when I happened to look over his way. His tree sparkled like a gold dust bag had broken loose from some poor miner’s hands above and around his door. If the wind had blown at that moment, my mouth would have been full of dead leaves.

I dropped my rake and walked up our least favorite neighbor’s walkway praying I didn’t disturb one of his leaves. It took a while when a younger version of him answered. I sort of stuttered asking is your dad here? No Miss, my dad passed two days ago. Right before he died, he told me he figured a young lady would drop by; I assume he meant you. If so, I expect you know now what he meant when he told you, some things are better off left alone.

Rachealgrace Adams (c)

Wow I got captivated, thanks Rachael Grace

Eric Sonnenschein

Author, Writer, Medical Writer

7 年

Pretty sad that a person couldn't respond to another who was reaching out to him. But that is what bitterness and illness can do. I like the way you told it. It is raw, without all of the grammatical niceties...it reads like poetry.

Carlotta Maria Shinn Russell

Author, ACB, President Mobile Branch AAUW, GGA

8 年

Beautiful Rachelgrace. Understanding what beauty means to the next person or our neighbor is a vital part of being neighborly. There are things in our life that give us the most joy that we have. What sparkles to us might be an annoyance to another. Life is like this. There is use for each and every soul that passes upon this earth and a reason for every leaf that drops from a tree. Good has a plan for all his creation. He give us richly all things to enjoy. At the end of life each and everyone has to find beauty and know why that beauty exists as this man this. Finally in the end you saw what he saw probably all his life. He saw it as beauty, another sees it only as a tree that needed trimming. We have to be careful in life not to take away the only joy that someone has left. I love the story and the end. Especially the part where he left a message for you. Even at deaths door we love our neighbors. Cheers my friend.

Just beautiful. Poignant and beautiful.

JT Horn

Retired at Path-Finders

8 年

Which things do you think God wants us to leave well enough alone? You have a way with words and words have a way with you. Jim Horn

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