I'm Not Asleep, Just Resting My Eyes
Des Illusion, by Christian Satin, 2015

I'm Not Asleep, Just Resting My Eyes

Power of personality, his ego driven need

Constant flow of words, desire in the lead


He is working the room, leading the pack

That's his perception, we endure the attack.


Would it be better if we all walked away?

How would he stop us, force us to stay?


Its not the loudness that so offends me

Or his rudeness that's urging me to flee


And the knowledge he imparts is not required

That subject has gotten old, it should be retired


All his words have been of no one, he only ever speaks of him

Perfection is boring, wake me when he starts admitting sins

I can't believe this,???? you read my fortune. ... Mazza!.. Gwendolyn

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Dave Dutton-Fraser

President, Founder at Fraser's Edge Wordsmithing and EROS,Writer, Lecturer, Occultist, Wizard, Former Bad Guy.

4 年

Well thank you so much MicheleElys Slayer of Myths?. I think my othere poems dealing with similar character types like Love by Gas Light and Alice's Problem may be even better than this one but what do I know. I can't even figure out how to self publish! LOL

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This needs to be seen, tagging Greg Knowel and I as I think of others, will include them Well stated Dave

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