HOW TO WRITE A SALES PAGE: PRACTICAL COPYWRITING MINI-COURSE FOR ONLINE ENTREPRENEURS

HOW TO WRITE A SALES PAGE: PRACTICAL COPYWRITING MINI-COURSE FOR ONLINE ENTREPRENEURS

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Need to write a sales page for an upcoming launch? Looking to improve the existing copy in your funnel or website?

If so,?I’m going to teach you the?10 things your sales page?MUST?include?if you want to make sure your copy creates trust, builds authority and converts like craaaaaaazy.

Coming to you this week with a super quick sneak peek into?the full sales page training?that I teach my students inside my flagship program –?the Copy Posse Launch Files. And inside my 5-day?Write & Ignite Challenge.

In this article, I’m sharing 10 conversion triggers that I?always?look for when writing – or reviewing – a sales page.?

But first, if you’re new to the crew – welcome!

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Now – today I’m going to teach you?exactly?how to optimize your sales page –?from the bottom to the very top.?

This tutorial is perfect for any coach or entrepreneur with a?service-based?or?education?business.?Think of things like 1:1 coaching or consulting in-depth online programs, or other services.?

Now – ya ready to dive right in?

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All great Sales Pages need to start with…?

#1. Headline?

The?headline?may be the shortest section of a sales page, but it definitely?takes the longest to write. In fact, I usually write my headlines LAST.

But, because it’s the first thing a prospect sees on the page, it’s the first conversion trigger we’ll talk about here.??

You want to be sure that your headline is?strategically written?to:

  • Hook your prospects’?attention
  • Introduce a core?pain point,?benefit, or?USP?of the offer?
  • Open a loop?that entices the reader to keep scrolling below the fold

YEP. That’s a?big job?for such a small section of text.?

Another thing you need to consider when writing your headline is…

Speaking directly to your target audience?– and more importantly – to their specific?level of customer awareness.

Moving on to the next conversion trigger you must include…?

#2. Indoctrination

Essentially this is what comes?immediately after the headline.?It’s the lead-in portion of your sales page – the build-up?before?you actually start selling anything.

This copy is?insanely important?because this is when your reader self-selects and decides whether or not you’re actually talking to THEM!?And yes, like the headline, it can be?very difficult and take the longest to write…

But it’s worth taking the time to do it right because when done well it can make a?MASSIVE?impact on your conversion rate.

Your indoctrination needs to “indoctrinate” your readers on who you are, why they should listen to you, and?why they should care at all.?This is where you?empathize,?educate, and?validate?your reader – you can do this through storytelling, sharing stats and facts or painting a picture of what’s to come…

And of course, the most important thing is that you speak to your prospects’ immediate?needs?and?fears, which takes us to the next conversion trigger…

#3. Problem & Solution

Of course, the whole point of your sales page is to sell something that solves a problem for your audience. So you need to get really clear on what that is.

As human beings, we’re (unfortunately) wired to?avoid pain above gaining pleasure.?This means that in our most natural state, we respond to?problems?more urgently than we do?solutions.?

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Because of this, the sales page needs to address your?prospect’s problem?–?what I like to call the aggravating status quo – early on…

Your copy should evoke an?emotional?response –?but be careful not to put salt in the wound.

You don’t want them to feel alienated, misunderstood, or attacked?you want your copy to make them feel?safe, understood, and heard.

That’s why you should effectively?and?accurately communicate?ONE?core problem in your copy before introducing your promising solution, or the “big promise” your reader is looking for.?

In this case,?specificity?goes a long, long way. No one is going to believe you have a solution that does EVERYTHING under the sun. Think of how your solution is the BIG easy button for what your client is looking for.

Now, a very important distinction to make is that?the?solution?is?not?the?product…?at least not yet.

Rather, at this point in your sales page, the solution should just be the specialized method, approach, discovery, or tool that can solve your prospects’ problem.

Remember – they FIRST have to believe in the solution, before they buy your product –?whether it be coaching, mentorship, guidance, expert services…

Now, once a believable solution is presented, you want to pivot into…

#4. The Offer

This is where you introduce your specific version of that solution – aka product – as the?easiest,?simplest,?fastest, or?best way?to attain the big promise that you just talked about.?Here is where you want to have a clear and concise USP – or?Unique Selling Proposition.?

This is also where you want to include the?value breakdown?and all those left-brain details that make up your product:?

  • What it is
  • How it works
  • Where to get it
  • When to expect it
  • How much it costs?

The most important thing to remember in this section is that the?value?of your offer should?always?be greater than the?price.?

The greater the gap between?value?and?price—the more irresistible your offer becomes.

This is why you often see campaigns that use bonuses, price juxtaposition, or discounts to increase the offer appeal and, therefore, conversion rate.?

Alright. Now you have all the left brain stuff out of the way. It’s time to address…

#5. Juicy Benefits

Or bennies, as I like to call them.?This is where you stop talking about the?what?of your offer and start talking about the?why.?Or in other words… WHY your prospect would want to buy your product.?I mean, what’s in for them –?really?

This is where you can do deeper into all the amazing things your product or service does on top of the big promise you already shared.

It’s not enough to simply show them what they’re getting. It changes the game altogether when a prospect believes they have to have it.?

You answer this question in sales copy by presenting?the specific and relatable benefits?that the product can provide.?

And remember, features are NOT benefits.?

Features are something a product HAS or IS, whereas benefits illustrate desired results that solve REAL pain points.?

For example, a?FEATURE?would be “batteries included”.?

Whereas the corresponding?BENEFIT?would be “no disappointed child on Christmas morning”.?

Now it can be pretty difficult to convert features into benefits – especially when you’re writing for your own product or service. It takes practice!!

If you need help squeezing some juicy bennies out of your features, I have a FREE?feature-to-benefit converter?that you can download.

Alright, next up you want to make sure you’re including…

#6. Social Proof & Authority

A common objection in the minds of consumers is whether or not a brand is the?RIGHT?company or person for them.?

Trust is a huge factor?that determines a customer’s decision to buy from you.?

So it’s important that a sales page communicates?social?proof?and?authority?through?testimonials, social media stats, press coverage, credentials, experience and any other credibility factors.

However, authority is not just something you slap into a single section on the salespage — I like to see it communicated?throughout?the copy?as much as possible.

Alright now on to lucky #7…

#7. Scarcity

In marketing,?scarcity?refers to the idea of making products or services limited in some way, making people more likely to act because the offer is scarce or exclusive.?

The 4 most common types of scarcity are:

  • Price: limited-time discount
  • Quantity: limited amount left
  • Premium: limited-time bonuses
  • Offer: limited-offer/cart closing

The most effective sales copy communicates scarcity that compels the prospect to act?while the offer is still available.?

And –?this is insanely important –?your copy also needs to clearly and effectively communicate a big reason WHY the offer is limited, without it being hypey, pushy, or misleading.?

Is it because of a?special event?like an anniversary? A?passionate mission?to touch 1000 lives by the end of the year? A?global?cause?such as World Mental Health Day??

Having a reason why massively increases?trust?and?believability.?And, this goes without saying…?but?always?use REAL scarcity.?Never lie and say and offer is limited when it’s not.

Before we move on to the next conversion trigger, I want to make sure I clarify that NOT ALL sales pages?need?scarcity all the time.?

If you want your sales page to be 100% evergreen for anyone to purchase anytime, scarcity can be left off the table. Instead, use urgency and provide benefits as to why someone would want to act right away.?

Ok moving right along to #8…?

#8. Risk Reversal

In other words, how does the copy make the purchase process seem?easy, safe, and risk-free?

People like to be told?exactly?what to do and what is going to happen next, so the copy needs to assure them that they will be taken care of?every step of the way…?

From the moment they add the product to the cart, to when it will be delivered, to how it can be returned if it doesn’t work out.?

This is where you’d want to include any:

  • Security language
  • Verifications
  • Return or exchange policies
  • Next steps & delivery details

In other words, this is where?you want to debunk the fear?of, “Am I going to be screwed over by this company/person?”

Now onto #9…

#9. Call-to-Action

Whether it’s a single button or a multi-tiered order section — the?call-to-action, or CTA, needs to?pack a serious punch.?

It must only take?a second?for the prospect to understand exactly where to?click?and how to?buy?the product.?

Your CTA should be?clear?and?straight to the point.?For instance:

  • “Order Now”
  • “Get Instant Access”
  • “Enroll Now”

The most important rule of copywriting is to have one clear and concise call to action.?

It can appear multiple times though.

For example, if you have a longer sales page, then you’d probably want to include your call-to-action button 2 to 3 times throughout the copy.?And always always always make a CTA?the very last thing?someone would see if they scroll to the very bottom of your page.?

And finally, number 10…?

#10. Overall Feel & Flow

This is less about the copy itself and more about the?readability of your sales page?which is an?insanely important factor to consider.

Once you have the first 9?conversion?and?optimization?triggers covered, it’s time to sit back, look at the entire picture, and ask yourself:

  • Is the sales page messaging consistent and coherent throughout?
  • Is the page easy to skim with clear section titles that guide me down the page?
  • Was everything easy to read or did I stop to read any sentences twice??
  • Were there any glaring gaps or illogical links?

Make sure that the copy is?simple?and?effective.?

I’ve said this a few times before and I’ll say it again — studies have shown that the average reader?reads at a 7th-grade level.? So there’s no need for wordiness, fancy explanations, or long lists of adjectives in a single sentence.??

I personally find that reading the entire sales page out loud helps me answer these questions.?

Now here’s one more bonus tip for ya…

Make sure you read the page on your cell phone!!!??

With far more than half of the online readers consuming sales pages on mobile devices, you want to?make damn sure?that your copy is easy to read and navigate on small screens…?

And there you have it — an?exclusive?insider look at the 10 triggers I include on all my sales pages.

Now if you need help connecting the dots and taking your sales page from theoretical to tangible…

Make sure to?check out my 5-day program,?the?Write & Ignite Challenge.?

Where you won’t just learn the parts of writing a sales page…

But I will actually help you IMPLEMENT it all so that you can write your own high-converting sales page in just 5 days!?

I hope this has been helpful.?Thank you for reading and subscribing.

Alex

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Alex Cattoni is the Founder of the Copy Posse Agency and Academy. Since 2011, she has launched several successful brands and has proudly partnered with many of the hottest transformational brands and businesses on the planet, writing high-converting sales copy, scaling multi-million dollar brands, and crafting iconic promotional campaigns.

Today, she’s on a mission to mobilize the raddest, baddest crew of authentic copywriters with a passion for creating community, credibility and conversions with nothing but powerful and precise wording.

Through her weekly?YouTube?videos, Alex helps copywriters, aspiring copywriters and entrepreneurs learn, write and ignite their businesses with words that work.

Quratulain Merchant

Founder of Market Crafters | SaaS Content Marketing | Helping B2B SaaS Companies Attract High-Quality Leads & Reduce CAC with Strategic Copy | Certified NLP Practitioner

2 年

Gold nuggets ??

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Your next copywriter in B2B, hospitality & events ? Composing clear, plucky, heart-centred words that shine during uncertain times - or at any time ?? Delegate Wranglers Superstar Supplier ? #TeamEspresso

2 年

Alex, please know that I get so much value from the expertise you share generously. You are the bomb, lady. ??

Sultan Cheema

The messaging guy for brand designers/studios.

2 年

Kind of basic and same that everyone teaches but still helpful for newbies. Alex Cattoni I request you to make some mediocre to advance copywriting stuff too.

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2 年

Love the 3rd point, very true. Make your audience feel understood. ???????????? This builds connection and makes them trust you. Love this

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