How to eliminate redundancies and keep your readers engaged
Marie Gettel-Gilmartin
Never be boring! | Award-winning writer, podcaster, and inclusive communicator and leader | Helping companies boost employee engagement, productivity, and thought leadership | Business and leadership coach
I began my career 30+ years ago as a technical editor at CH2M HILL, trained by the best to strike out grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors; check for technical accuracy; and root out redundancies and inconsistencies. When I checked the engineers’ math in documents, I felt victorious when I found an error!
I still get a slight thrill when I tackle a piece of verbose prose and distill it down to engaging, concise, and pithy narrative.
Working with engineers, architects, and planners for most of my life, I’ve found that many in these professions seem to believe their writing is more effective or impressive if they use more words to say what they mean.
So let’s tackle repetitive redundancies! (Get it?)
When I saw a client’s website for which I had written content, I noticed they had actually added redundant statements on their bios. Resumes and bios are a common place for redundancies to occur. For example:
Me at the young age of 26, working as a technical editor
“If I had more time, I would have written a shorter letter.” –Blaise Pascal
Here are some phrases to avoid:
“Currently working”: The verb form “-ing” denotes the current time, so “currently working” is always redundant. The same goes for “presently,” which is actually an incorrect use of the word. (We can tackle that one another time!) Just use the verb alone (e.g., “working,” “performing,” “managing.”)
“Repeat again”: “Repeat” means to do it again, so you don’t need to say “again.”
“Projected construction planned for 2021”: "Projected" and "planned for" mean the same thing, so you can eliminate one of them.
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“We also prepared the engineering design, which included the design of grading, utilities, and streets”: You don’t need to say “design” twice.
“In the process of applying for site plan permits”: Both "in the process of" and “applying” denote the present tense, so you don’t need “in the process of.”
“I got home at 2 a.m. in the morning”: “a.m.” means morning, so get rid of one.
“In the year 2020”: You can just say “in 2020.” Your reader knows it's a year.
“Actual fact”: A fact is actual, always, so you do not need both words.
“Close proximity”: This term is rife in engineering documents. “Close” means “proximity.” So you’re saying close close.
“Past history”: History is always past.
“Postpone until later”: By definition, postponing is doing something later. Instead, be specific and say “postpone until next week.”
“Unexpected surprise or unintentional mistake”: Surprises and mistakes are always unexpected and unintentional, right?
What other examples of redundancies do you see in other people’s writing? Have you noticed this tendency in your own writing? Let me know if you can think of other examples.
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I help professional services companies avoid BORING by making communications painless and boosting employee engagement, productivity, and brand recognition. I turn lackluster, jargon-filled or technical prose into clear dynamic narrative. I help companies create unleavable leaders. More information at www.fertilegroundcommunications.com.
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2 年Removing redundant sentences makes your content sound more authoritative and keeps your audience more engaged. Great topic! Marie Gettel-Gilmartin. Thanks for sharing??