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Najma Yusufi
Lecturer in 20th Century English Literature, University of Brighton, MD of BrownBritain, Author, Member of the Centre for Applied Philosophy, Politics and Ethics, Early Career Researcher.
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INT. HALLWAY - EARLY EVENING
We follow a woman, SHAZIA, (Asian, mid forties), as she enters the hallway of a house in a village in Somerset in 2018. Over her shoulder, we see SIMON , (White, early fifties), following.
SHAZIA stops and stares in horror at something we cannot see.
SIMON runs forward and grabs the hanging corpse of their daughter (ZUBIYA, seventeen), by the feet.
ZUBIYA (V.O.)
At seventeen I was going mad. I didn’t
ask for it. But it just happened.
INT. EARLY EVENING
The quiet village is populated by the usual suspects of geriatric retirees and one odd family; SHAZIA, (Asian, mid forties) and SIMON, (White, early fifties) and ZUBIYA (Asian, seventeen) and ERUM (Asian, fourteen).
There is a stark contrast between their house interiors and the countryside location. SHAZIA dresses in a loose kaftan while SIMON is a clean cut Middle England type.
The light of the upstairs bedroom is on and a ZUBIYA
is up against the window (with open curtains) wildly gesturing and then stopping and staring out.
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INT. KITCHEN - NIGHT
Shazia stands by the kitchen sink washing a pot, while
her ex husband ALI (forties, Asian) talking through her speaker phone. We can hear a TV playing in the next room.
SHAZIA
The only people I do spend money on
are the kids.
ALI (Sniggers)
SHAZIA (pause and sigh)
Really. Can
ALI (interrupting)
At least try and send the kids to the mosque. Just go down to Bristol mosque and go through the ladies side. Make sure the kids have the right clothes on. Just ask the Molvi what classes they do and then start taking them down.
SHAZIA I’ll try. Right now I work tomorrow so bye.
SHAZIA wipes her brow and carries
NEXT DAY
EXT. SCHOOL - MORNING
We hear the school bell ring out.
Asian) walk towards the main door
Is frantically texting. ERUM looks at her sister.
ERUM
You need to tie your hair back and
just chill. Yeah?
have to prep for on with the work.
ZUBIYA and ERUM (fourteen, with other teens. ZUBIYA
3.
ZUBIYA
Oh my God, there he is. I know he
wants me. He was online all night, it could be that he’s turned on my cam remotely thinking I don’t even know. L.O.L.
ERUM
You on crack. He seriously doesn’t
give a fuck. He’s got bare girls.
ZUBIYA
So, that just means they are chasing
him not that he is actually talking to any of them.
ERUM
O. M. G. You are seriously next level
cringe.
A school friend runs up to ERUM and hugs her.
EMILY Hey Bae. Missed you.
ERUM
What time is Mum picking us up.
Dunno. ZUBIYA shrugs.
ZUBIYA
ERUM pauses and then rolls her eyes. Her and her friend run off giggling.
INT. COLLEGE CLASSROOM - MORNING
SHAZIA is carrying a few files and has a big bag with her; weighted down she walks along the college hallway and into the classroom.
The eyes of the standing college boys follow her all the way.
BOY 1 (in Somali)
Look at her ass.
4.
BOY 2
Searches his phone and turns on a
song..All the milkshake brings all the boys to the yard - damn right.... (Peels of laughter)
SHAZIA
How old are you guys. Can you stop
behaving like five year olds and pack it in.
Savage.
BOY 2
BOY 1 Miss miss Shak got by a child. He’s a
SHAZIA Will you stop it.
BOY 1 Stop what miss.
fucked last night peado Miss.
SHAZIA
Can we just concentrate on the task at
hand and behave like adults. (Pauses) Right today we need to look at the life cycle of a product. So ice breaker. Lets shoot up some names - What comes to mind in the context of business when I say product life cycle.
She switches on the over head projector as she is talking and pulls the classroom blinds down. They start looking at a business diagram on the whiteboard.
INT. HALLWAY SCHOOL - AFTERNOON
The hallway is full the students. As the school bell goes off ADAM (seventeen, WHITE), a good looking boy runs up to ZUBIYA while his friends hang back and watch from a safe distance.
ADAM
Zubiya.
Hi Adam. You OK?
ZUBIYA
5.
ADAM
Yeh yeh. Listen I just wanted to say
that do you fancy coming to the gym with me.
ZUBIYA YES! You sure.
ADAM
Course I am. Laters yeh.
ADAM runs back to his mates and then high fives them. ZUBIYA looks on.
ADAM Dreaming.
They all fall about laughing.
EXT. SITE - LATE AFTERNOON
Simon is closing a measuring device at the side of a road. Wiping sweat from his brows he feel the sun bearing down on him.
SIMON
Shall we try and pack up lads the Mrs
is cooking a curry tonight.
MAN
Isn’t that every night?
SIMON
No it isn’t. We do eat other things
too. Pull the ropes up and turn the two generators on at least that will keep the drill going for another four hours...
MAN
So what have you had this week then?
SIMON
Spaghetti Bolognese last night. We had
fish and chips on Friday and tonight its curry.
6.
MAN
Fare enough. I’m off to watch city
play tonight. Save me some of that curry..
INT. CLASSROOM - LATE AFTERNOON
ZUBIYAS mobile rings as she leaves class. Knocking her bag out in the hurry. Shes looks at her phone.
Dad.
ZUBIYA
ALI
Sallam. How’s school, did you get the
English grade back?
ZUBIYA
Oh my God Dad the teacher said I could
get onto the UK Youth Parliament. I googled it. Its amazing like that is a route to politics Sadiq Khan and most of the Labour party started when they were my age. What do you think?
ALI
That is the best thing for you Zubi,
you know the London Mayor is a Muslim. You should stick to your plans doing Law. What’s your sister upto?
ZUBIYA I don’t know.
ALI
I spoke to Mum, she needs to take you
guys to the mosque.
ZUBIYA
Dad don’t want to go to mosque.
ALI
Stop talking rubbish. Go to mosque and
learn.
ZUBIYA
Well, remember that other Paki girl
in. Her parents are like areally religious. You know the ones; they have that curry house. The Bengalis
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Yeah.
ALI
ZUBIYA
She goes to mosque and she hates it.
Now shes turned lesbo and eats sausages in school canteen. Her parents don't even know. She has a girl friend in Canada. She found her on line. Can you believe it?
ALI
Well that's her thing you just go with
your mum and you'll understand. Not everyone is like that girl.
ZUBIYA
OK.
Take care. I’ll call tomorrow.
Bye.
INT. BEDROOM - EVENING
ZUBIYA is in her room with the curtains open to the darkness outside.
She dances in her room with the music on low. She has her pyjamas on. Her hair is all over the place and she has a
full face of makeup.
ERUM is in the next room, in her bedroom, lying on her carpet taking nude shots of herself and smiling.
INT. LOUNGE - EVENING
Shazia is sitting at her laptop on the floor with a Bollywood film in the background typing away.
ALI ZUBIYA
8.
ERUM SHAZIA ERUM
SHAZIA
Have you finished the work on fire
fly.
ZUBIYA (shouting down the stairs)
No she hasn’t!
ERUM
Mum! What the fuck, I’ve been upstairs
for the whole time!
SHAZIA Show me first baba.
ERUM For fucks sake.
SHAZIA Will you stop swearing.
Mum
What?
Can I go out?
Sorry.
ERUM
SHAZIA
Ok, you can go but I will be seriously
angry if I find out you haven’t done the work.
ERUM Love you.
SHAZIA Love you princess.
ZUBIYA runs down the stairs.
ZUBIYA
You always let her do anything. It’s
bloody ridiculous.
SHAZIA
Excuse me. Can you get on with your
work.
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Mum!
ZUBIYA
SHAZIA
Can you just concentrate on what you
have to do and stop being so mean to your sister.
ZUBIYA
Dad called and said you were supposed
to take us to the mosque.
SHAZIA
Well yes we did discuss it but right
now I don’t think it’s the right path for you guys.
ZUBIYA mutters under her breath and goes back to her room.
EXT. ON THE PAVEMENT - EVENING
ERUM (into phone)
I’m here, pick me up quickly, Don’t want Mum to come.
INT. LOUNGE - NIGHT
The lounge is clean and minimalist; well decorated and
up to date. We see some Indian embroidered cushions on the sofa and some incense sticks burning. There is also an India rug on the floor.
Time passes and Shazia returns to typing on her laptop while the TV plays in the background with (Channel Four News) the latest faux pas of Trump.
Zubiya stomps upstairs.
ZUBIYA (into phone)
I’m so sick Dad. Mum always favouring Erum. You have no idea what she’s up to. I know shes slept with a boy.
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And Jo said he saw her taking drugs too - she’s only fourteen.
EXT. PARK - EVENING
Erum sits on the low wall taking a drag on a cigarette while a young white lad touches his crotch and stands between her legs with a smirk.
Some grime music plays out from her phone.
There are other kids there too but no one takes any notice. They start kissing.
The boy opens his fly and ERUMS hand goes to is crotch. It gets late.
BOY
You’re peng you know that.
ERUM
BOY ERUM
Shutup. Seriously.
Shutup.
NEXT DAY
INT. HOUSE - MORNING
ALI (into phone)
Give you mother the phone.
ZUBIYA (into phone)
OK.
Zubiya runs down the stairs and hands her mum the phone.
ALI (into phone)
Have you completely lost your mind.
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SHAZIA (into phone)
Listen I’ve got people coming soon, I don’t have time for this. What’s the problem.
ALI (into phone)
Zubiya just told me Erums been smoking and seeing some boy. What the hell is going on. You really need to set some boundaries.
SHAZIA (into phone)
I’ll handle it.
ALI (into phone)
You spoil her rotten, I know you’re not going to do anything.
SHAZIA (into phone)
Listen Zubiya is talking rubbish she doesn’t know what she’s on about.
ALI (into phone)
You have been a ridiculous influence on the girls. All your bullshit ideas.
SHAZIA (into phone)
What do you mean. I have done my bloody best, It’s not been easy.
ALI (into phone)
All self inflicted. You haven’t even taught them nimaz.
SHAZIA (into phone)
Oh my God, I have, they just don't understand. When we went to Paki I even got a molvi for them.
ALI (into phone)
It’s got to be consistent.
SIMON listens to the loud conversation and snatches the phone off SHAZIA.
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SIMON (into phone)
Listen mate I’m not being rude but you really need to show Shazia some respect. She’s at work, she’s picking and dropping the girls. When was the last time you actually came over to see them. I mean sorry mate but really.
ALI (into phone)
Could you give her the phone its about our girls and it doesn’t seem like she is controlling Erum very well. Is she?
Disgusted SIMON hand the phone back to SHAZIA. And she carries on with the conversation with a lower voice while SIMON goes into the other room.
INT. SCHOOL CORRIDOR - AFTERNOON.
BOY 1
Yo Zubiya. Adam Bains fancies you.
BOY 2
Why don’t you check your locker.
ZUBIYA
What? My locker’s got a padlock on it.
ZUBIYA stops short of her locker and see’s it been broken into. She slowly opens it and sees photos of Adam with pen marks on it saying I love Adam. The boys keel over laughing again. She starts crying and runs off.
INT. SCHOOL OFFICE - AFTERNOON
ZUBIYA
But Miss how did they even know I like
Adam. Who would do such a thing. Who? I don’t understand. (crying hysterically)
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MISS HOPWOOD
Zubiya, boys can be very cruel; I
know. But you have told a lot of people including me. Do you remember?
ZUBIYA That wasn’t Adam Miss.
MISS HOPWOOD Well who was?
ZUBIYA
I told you; it was Tom.
MISS HOPWOOD
Well I know whats happened is horrid.
Rest assured we will be dealing with it Zubiya. I’ll need to call your Mum.
ZUBIYA
Why does this happen to me all the
time?
ZUBIIYA starts crying hysterically and gets louder.
MISS HOPWOOD
You’d feel better if your mother was
here. Hmm?
ZUBIYA
No! She’ll say it was my fault. She
doesn’t understand. You don’t know.
MISS HOPWOOD
As said that will be looked at but
honestly don’t you think you’ll feel better if Mum takes you home.
Zubiya rubs her face and looks down.
INT. KITCHEN - AFTERNOON
The cordless phone rings on the light wood kitchen table. We can see a large country garden through the sliding patio doors.
Hello
SHAZIA
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MISS HOPWOOD Hello Mrs Rashid
SHAZIA It’s Ms Khan
MISS HOPWOOD
Oh I do apologize. It’s the Wedmore
Academy here. It’s about Zubiya. Nothing to be alarmed about but we have an issue and Zubiya is quite upset I think she would benefit from her mother being here. Would that be possible.
Sure.
SHAZIA
MISS HOPWOOD
Nothing to worry about. We can talk
when you’re here. Is that OK?
SHAZIA Yes, I’ll leave now.
INT. EMILYS BEDROOM - EVENING
ERUM
Bae proper scating out.
EMILY
Seriously? (sings) I want your bootee
girlfriend.
ERUM
Fuck off. Is my vag clean (she pulls
her pants down)
EMILY
Looks fine. Put that Victoria Secret
on. did you sot the room out?
ERUM
Yep. Shall I put this on, with this?
She holds up a small top and some jeans.
EMILY
Put that with it underneath.
She points at a contrasting bra on the floor and picks it up.
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INT. COMMUNITY HALL - DAY
It is ALI’S wedding day. He is getting married to a more traditional yet British Asian woman. He is happy with this arranged marriage. RASHIDA (Asian, late forties) dressed in an Asian bridal red outfit slowly walks towards the stage set and waiting ALI.
He looks up and smiles at her.
People whisper in the background and food is being served to the guests on the round tables, young Asian boys are serving the meals in paper plates.
ZUBIYA and ERUM look around uneasily.
ZUBIYA
Can’t believe Dads getting married
again?
ERUM
You reckon this was what Mum and Dads
wedding was like.
ZUBIYA Probably more posh.
ERUM
Hmm
Ali walks over to the girls.
ALI
Girl’s come and say Salaam to your new
Mum.
Zubiya and Erum go up to the stage. Ali gets them
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to sit down on the sofa with the bride.
RASHIDA
I have a present for you.
She gestures to her cousin to pass a nearby plastic bag.
ERUM
What?
RASHIDA pulls out two head scarves and hands them to Erum and Zubiya. She glances at Ali. He approves.
INT. COLLEGE CLASSROOM - DAY
SHAZIA (Into phone)
Shall we go out tonight, the girls are away so may as well.
Looking out through the industrial window.
SIMON (Into phone)
Fancy going down the Woody for a meal and we can invite the Claires?
SHAZIA (Into phone)
Why not. God knows what state the girls are going to be in when they get home.
EXT. SCHOOL - DAY
ERUM
Bae so glad to be back. Really do not
like the woman.
EMILY Who's the woman
ERUM
My step mum. Dad wants us to call her
Mum. I would never call her mum. My mum is my mum. Know what I mean Em.
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Yeh.
EMILY
ERUM
Would you call a step mum Mum.
EMILY O.M.G never ever ever.
NEXT DAY - INT. COLLEGE - DAY
Shazia’s phone pings with a message. “Your daughter is the biggest scank ever”. With it there is a nude of ERUM. She slumps on her seat.
SHAZIA What the hell.
INT. LOUNGE - EVENING
We see that Ali is sitting in front of the TV and on the sofa eating a curry with his hand while Rashida stands in the open plan kitchen cooking. There are differences between his
house and Shazia’s house. Ali’s house has many religious texts on the wall and a prayer mat laid out.
INT. LOUNGE - EVENING
SHAZIA dials a number while ERUM sits, loudly crying and screaming on the stairs. ZUBIYA sits with her sister holding her hand.
SHAZIA (into phone)
Detective, I need this to be taken very seriously. She is only fourteen and she has been coerced into having sex with a older boy - so that classes him as a pedophile, I definitely would like to press charges without a douth.
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SIMON (mouthing)
You need to calm down
SHAZIA frantically gestures to SIMON to sit down and be quiet.
DETECTIVE
(into phone)
Madam these things need to be investigated we have to go to his house and get his version and possibly seize the phone and laptop.
SHAZIA (into phone)
Well he would obviously deny it. But I know he has taken these photos or at least shared them with people and he has had non consensual sex with a minor! I need you to know that I am an educated woman and a lecturer and will not repeat will not take this lying down and want swift action.
DETECTIVE
(into phone)
My apologies for coming across otherwise. We will indeed get started and we will keep you posted. By no means do we take such reports lightly.
SHAZIA puts the phone down and starts crying as SIMON comes to hug her. They sit quietly for a moment. Erum walks in from the stairs with tears stains on her face.
ERUM
Mum I didn’t do anything.
SHAZIA I can’t believe you thing I ask you not
go and do it.
betrayed. The one to do. You fucking
What?
ERUM
SHAZIA
SEX! I have let you guys do whatever
you want, even against your fathers wishes. No rules, no Paki stuff and this is what you do.
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I asked you only one thing, do not have sex before seventeen. For fucks sake what is wrong with you. Do you even care about me. Care about yourself. I am so fucking sick of this shot,. I just want to fucking kill myself. Why why don’t you just fucking know me. Fucking disgusting. Fucking disgusting, What the fuck have you fucking done. Do yo want to fucking explain this shit to me.
SAHZIA gets up and starts hitting ERUM. ZUBIYA and SIMON intervene. ERUM is hysterical. ZUBIYA is screaming too. It’s loud and messy.
NEXT DAY
EXT. SCHOOL - DAY
ERUM opens the text and shows EMILY at school “Your Mum is the biggest bitch on the planet. She better watch her back”
Fuck.
EMILY
ERUM Crazy innit?
EMILY
What do you reckon’s gonna happen.
No idea.
ERUM
EMILY
O.M.G Keiren is probably going proper
skits. Ask your Mum if I can stay at yours.Don’t want to stay at mine. My mum is a bitch.
ERUM
Yeah.
Messages start pinging on ERUMS phone.
“You are so fucked” “Snake”
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“We are going to fuck you up” ERUM starts crying.
NEXT DAY
INT. SUPERSTORE AISLE - DAY
ALI (into phone)
It’s me.
SHAZIA (into phone)
You OK? What’s up. Congratulations by the way.
ALI (into phone)
Hmm, thanks. So you gonna tell me whats going on?
SHAZIA (into phone)
I’ll handle it but seriously you need to be about more.
ALI (into phone)
Why don’t you just give them to me. You know that’s the better option. You can’t handle it.
SHAZIA (into phone)
I’d never do that. Listen, just leave it I’ll handle it.
ALI (into phone)
You realize Zubiya called me she was upset. Are you going to tell me what’s going on.
SHAZIA (into phone)
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Just leave it. I’m dealing with stuff. Listen speak soon OK.
NEXT DAY
INT. OFFICE - DAY
SIMON is with the construction workers in his office. They are having tea.
They laugh.
SIMON
I mean she really went for her. I
personally don’t understand. These days the youngsters are different aren’t they.
MAN 1
Course they are. My boy had sex. I
think he was probably fourteen too.
SIMON
With social media these days. You just
can’t keep the kids away from it. You can shout and scream all you like but at the end of the day ..
MAN 1
They do what they want to do.
SIMON
That’s what I said. But she’s hell
bent on taking this lad to court. God Knows.
MAN 1
You know what women are like. Let her
just get on with it. You just need to be supportive..
SIMON And pay the bills.
INT. BEDROOM - DAY
Posters of Justin Beiber adorn the wall, a very messy bedroom. It looks dirty too.
22.
ZUBIYA looks at her phone while lying on her bed and plays with her already messy hair. She sees a message on the screen:
“Your sister is a whore. And you are a desperate whore.”
ZUBIYA reaches for a felt tip and starts drawing on her upper leg.
EXT. PAVEMENT - DAY
ZUBIYA walks along the pavement towards and country track leading to a water reservoir and an adjoining skate park. She is frantic. You see that both her legs are now covered in felt tip patterns.
She starts to talk to herself, mouthing words.
Boys in the skate park look at her and nudge each other and laugh.
She starts to walk towards them.
ZUBIYA Do any of you fancy you so do, everyone
BOY 1 What the fuck
ZUBIYA And I can see it in
at me.
me? Cause I know tells me and..
the way you look
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BOY 2 Seriously weird
ZUBIYA
Come on then are we gonna go to yours.
Have some fun.
BOY 1
We’re just chilling. Will you please..
BOY 2
Fuck off.
Come on. Stop playing hard to get.
BOY 1 Are you mad.
ZUBIYA
Don’t call me that. Just come.
ZUBIYA walks towards their car
BOY 1 Oh my God. Come on
BOY 2 What the hell.
BOY 1 Just f off.
and tries to get in guys.
ZUBIYA
ZUBIYA stops and starts walking towards the reservoir BOY 1 races after her and shoves her in. The boys then rush to the car and speed off. ZUBIYA shouts.
Wait! INT. LOUNGE - EVENING
ZUBIYA
SHAZIA
It’s hard for you, I know
SIMON
You and the girls mean everything to
me. I know I’m not their Dad but to me they're are my daughters too. We’re a family.
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I know.
SHAZIA
EXT. PATHWAY - EVENING
ZUBIYA is walking on the pathway drenched and still talking to herself.
INT. LOUNGE - EVENING
SIMON
So the burning question is will you
marry me?
SIMON bends down on one knee and fumbles for a ring and pulls it out.
SHAZIA No way! Seriously?
SIMON Seriously.
SHAZIA Let me think. Yes!
INT. KITCHEN/ DINNING ROOM - MORNING
ERUM and ZUBIYA comes in looking very sheepish and quiet. Pouring cornflakes for themselves. They look at each other. SIMON comes in very matter of fact and starts making a coffee. ZUBIYA walks in.
SIMON Want a coffee love?
SHAZIA
Yes please. Have you told the kids?
SIMON
No. Do you want to now?
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SHAZIA
No time like the present. Guys you
know we are getting married SHAZIA turns to the girls.
ERUM
We always knew you would
SHAZIA
Well its going to be sooner rather
then later.
Safe.
ERUM
ZUBIYA
That's really great Mum. Are you
happy?
SHAZIA
Course I am. But listen guys lets just
get though the investigation thing OK.
ERUM
So what are you going to wear Mum
SHAZIA
Probably some Paki bridal thing
ERUM
What the red thing. Really Mum?
Yeah.
ZUBIYA
SHAZIA
Actually, I was thinking of doing
something fusion.
ERUM
What’s that? Stop using words I don’t
understand Mum.
ZUBIYA You’re so thick.
Mum!
ERUM
SHAZIA
Like an ivory colored dress thing, one
that has Paki embroidery on it.
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Nice.
ZUBIYA
INT. KITCHEN/ DINNING ROOM - AFTERNOON
The dinning room has a few pots bubbling away on the range. Coriander is half cut on the side and some open spice bottles are open too.
The background has a British Asian station playing. Rashida is wearing jeans and a top with a hijab on. Ali walks in. He is also in jeans and a T - shirt.
RASHIDA
That woman is disgusting. You know
that don’t you?
ALI
She just doesn’t understand.
RASHIDA
Not understand what - to be a good
Muslim? It’s a joke.
ALI
She doesn’t know the meaning. Now she
tells me Erum has had some trouble with some boy and there’s a police investigation.
RASHIDA
What the hell. What do you mean?
ALI
Some boy was coercing Erum.
RASHIDA
I don’t know. Tansnia told me she’d
seen her on instagram with her boobs out.
ALI
Shazia’s bullshit is effecting the
children.
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RASHIDA
Living with that gora. Fucking Kafir.
And now look at Erum.
ALI
Apparently he’s proposed. Zubiya told
me they’re gonna get married.
RASHIDA
What! Is SIMON converting.
ALI
Why would he convert when she doesn’t
give a damn in the first place.
RASHIDA
Seriously, my parents would have shot
me had I carried on the way she does. Are you going to sort it?
ALI
Let her get back from school and I’ll
call her.
INT. BEDROOM - AFTERNOON.
ZUBIYA is lying in bed, clearly sick. Her back is
towards the wall and she is making shapes with her finger against the blank wall. She turns over to reach for a tissue box and knocks it over. She reaches under her bed to get it and then looks under her bed and starts gesturing talking to an imaginary person under the bed.
INT. CORRIDOR - AFTERNOON
The doorbell rings. SIMON Opens the door to the detective.
DETECTIVE 1
Afternoon. I’m DCI Mark Pritchard and
this is DCI Imran Hashimi. We were wondering if we could have a word.
Afternoon.
DETECTIVE 2
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turned
SIMON Sure. Come in, come in.
SIMON leads them to the kitchen and dinning room table.
SHAZIA
Pritchard
Yes. Pritichard.
gestures towards the
..
Hi.
Shazia this is DCI Mark
DETECTIVE 2 And I am DCI Imran Hashimi.
SHAZIA
Hi
All of them sit around the table.
DETECTIVE 1
So we wanted to discuss our initial
findings with you. These are the electronic forensics of the boy involved and these are the print outs of the conversations. All four thousand of them.
SHAZIA
Conversation between my daughter and
this older boy.
Yes.
DETECTIVE 2
SIMON DETECIVE 1 SIMON
DETECTIVE 1
And what we have found. I am sorry to
say that on examination of the conversations.
DETECTIVE 2 I have read them too.
DETECTIVE 1
It seems that it is your daughter that
is doing the coercing not the young lad. Who is seventeen not nineteen.
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SHAZIA
And that makes it OK does it. Him
being seventeen.
DETECTIVE 2 No we are not saying that.
DETECTIVE 1
But what we are saying is that it is
your daughter who is initiating the sexual slanted conversations not him.
DETECTIVE 1
And it would be our advice to not go
ahead with pursuing charges.
SIMON
Can I have a look at the printouts?
Yes sure.
DETECTIVE 2
SHAZIA
So it was ERUMS fault.
DETECTIVE 2
We are not saying it was anyone’s
fault we are saying that a drawn out charge may not be beneficial.
SHAZIA
I understand. Its just been a bit of a
shock. She’s only fourteen.
DETECTIVE 1
Totally understand what you’re going
through I’ve got three myself. All teenagers. So we shall leave you to it.
DETECTIVE 2
If you have any questions don't hesitate to call.
SHAZIA SIMON follows them out the door.
INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT
ZUBIYA still with her cold is in her bedroom laying on the
Yes.
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floor shredding the front of her jeans with loud music on. She then puts them on and looks at her reflection in the mirror. She then makes wild gestures and dances round dipping to the ground and laughing.
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ZUBIYAS PHONE
“You are a fucking loony and all the boys think you’re spastic” “Harry wants to fuck you cause he thinks you're fit as fuck”
INT. ERUMS ROOM - NIGHT
Shazia and Simon walk in and Erum is lying on her bed with her phone in her hand. Shazia hands her a national express coach ticket. Erum looks at it wide eyed.
SHAZIA
I’ve had enough. You guys are both
going to Dads for a couple of weeks.
ERUM What. Why?
SHAZIA
It’s all been too much for me.
SIMON The detective came.
SHAZIA
(shouting) And they told me it was you
who had been doing most of the coercing.
ERUM The what?
SHAZIA
The begging for sex. It’s fucking
disgusting. I bloody hate you. God knows what the hell Zubiya is up to too.
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NEXT DAY
INT. SCHOOL OFFICE - DAY
ZUBIYA is in the office crying hysterically, her jeans are shredded and she has worn them to school. The school counsellor and MISS HOPWOOD are trying to comfort ZUBIYA and talk to her. ZUBIYA is tearing tissue paper in her hand.
INT. COLLEGE CORRIRDOR - DAY
SHAZIA (into phone)
She’s had a hypermanic episode, a bloody breakdown. (pause) I don’t give a shit I’m
sending them down. You need to take it
up with the crisis team there. I am honestly drowning with all this shit. All I’m asking for is abit of help and you need to step up.
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A RUSH OF IMAGES AND VOICES SHOWING THE PROGRESSION OF ONE WEEK. ----------------------------------------------------------------
RASHIDA
How many times have I told you to wear
the loose shalwar kameez. And put your hijab on.
ERUM
I told her to do that twice.
Fuck off. Pardon!
ZUBIYA RASHIDA
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ZUBIYA is talking to a counsellor. ----------------------
RASHIDA folds a sari on her bed, scowling.
RASHIDA
Your mother has taught you nothing.
Its a joke.
ERUM
Well neither has yours. Have you heard
hwo rude you are?
RASHIDA
Excuse me. I wasn’t the one that
opened her legs at age fourteen. Ridiculous.
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ZUBIYA (into phone) Crying,
Mum we can’t stand it here she’s a cow and Dad doesn’t say anything.
SHAZIA (into phone)
You need to speak to Dad while you’re
there. What’s she doing. ------------------------
ZUBIYA is sitting in a hospital waiting lounge with ALI. ------------------------
ZUBIYA is talking to a counsellor and the counsellor is talking to her too.
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INT. BEDROOOM - NIGHT
SIMON
I was reading up on Olanzapene. Seems
its quite hard core. Adults with Psychosis take it. That’s bloody serious.
SHAZIA I am so so tired.
SIMON
I know hun but with kids that’s it
these days.
SHAZIA
Who the fuck has these issues.
Everyone.
SIMON
SHAZIA
God knows what people in the village
think of us. One kids a slut the other one is crazy.
SIMON
Crazy and slutty - kinda rhymes.
(Simon tries to lighten the mood). They cuddle each other. INT. LOUNGE
RASHIDA
Can you call Erum and Zubiya down,
they are seriously doing my head in.
ALI
Arre baba ab kya hua.
RASHIDA
Zubiya is walking around with her hair
all over the place. Do you know how much hair I’ve actually hoovered up. Like a dog. Then Erum is constantly on her phone. God knows who shes talking to.
ALI
Acha call them down. GUYS!
Zubiya and Erum clomp down the stairs, they know that to be called down like this means they’ve done something wrong so
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they are unhappy.
ZUBIYA Why are you shouting.
RASHIDA We were calling you.
ERUM Well there's no need
RASHIDA We weren’t. Ali.
to shout.
ALI
Listen girls we need to get some
sanity into this house and this situation.
ZUBIYA So you’re saying I’m
it?
RASHIDA What are you talking
ERUM Zubiya thinks you’re
crazy.
not sane. Is that
about? calling her
RASHIDA
Show some bloody respect.
ALI
Hang on, hang on. What are you guys on
about. Can we just come back to the issue at hand. Right Rashida what were you saying before we called them.
RASHIDA
I was saying that I cannot have this
level of disarray in the house. Zubiya can you please tie your hair up or get it cut.
ZUBIYA
I’m not fucking cutting my hair.
ALI Don’t swear.
ZUBIYA
Sorry, I’ll tie my hair up.
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RASHIDA
Fine. Erum, I can’t have you on the
phone night and day after all that has happened can you at least try and pray one nimaz with me a day.
ERUM
Yeah, no problem. Here you can have my
phone if you like.
RASHIDA I don’t want it.
Fine.
ERUM
ALI
Basically, what Rashida is trying to
say is Zubiya you have been prescribed your medication. You need to have at the right time and tie your hair back. And can both of you try and pray some nimaz. Can we at least try?
OK.
ZUBIYA
INT. PLANE - EVENING
ZUBIYA and ERUM get on the plane and sit down on their allotted seats. ZUBIYA get her headphones out and starts playing loud music through it. They both settle in to the flight. ERUMS phone flashes a message.
“Can’t wait.”
ERUM types.
“Me too (emoji)”
ERUM pulls an old magazine out of the Easyjet flight pocket.
NEXT DAY - INT. CLASSROOM - MORNING
Everything looks calm as MISS HOPWOOD is handing out exam
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37. papers to the students ZUBIYA is one of them.
INT. COLLEGE CLASSROOM - DAY
SHAZIA is standing up in front of her class and teaching. She seems light and focus. For once the students seem quiet.
INT. SCHOOL CORRIDOR - DAY
EMILY
You reckon you’ll be able to get out.
ERUM EMILY ERUM
EMILY
Why don’t I just pick you.
When? Tonight. Fuck knows.
How?
ERUM
EMILY
The lads. I’ll get them to park far
away. I’ll tell your mum that my mum is taking us back. To mine.
ERUM She’ll check.
EMILY
What do you mean check.
ERUM
Out the door. She’ll say well where’s
your mum I want to speak to her. You know what she’s like.
EMILY What the hell.
I know.
ERUM
INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT
ZUBIYA is lying on her bed and reaches for the bedside table and her mediation. She takes two table out and swallows it with out water and just stares at the ceiling.
INT. LOUNGE WINDOW - NIGHT
ERUM climbs out the window and jumps down onto the grass and Falls on her bottom. She stands up and dusts the grass off. She looks up at the window to see that all the lights are off. Looking down at her phone she walks away.
INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT
ALI
ZUBIYA is too clever to let this get
her down. You often find that with super intelligent kids.
RASHIDA
A she’s not a kid anymore and B she
know nothing about the religion. What pillars of Islam has she followed or does she follow. In her day to day life I mean.
ALI
Hmm true. I get sick of it too. But
that crazy cow is raising the girls. You know I try.
RASHIDA
Ya Allah! I am not blaming you. I’m
blaming that Kafir you married.
Hmm.
ALI
RASHIDA
Did you read that thing on the news
with that grooming stuff. Imi’s lot were involved apparently.
No way.
ALI
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Apparently.
RASHIDA
ALI I’ll call.
RASHIDA
Call them tomorrow it’s family time
now.
RASHIDA comes close to ALI.
ALI
Hmm
The doorbell rings. ALI goes to answer it. While RASHIDA puts on her dressing gown and comes down the stairs. Its her cousin and another relative (ZAKI, Thirties, Asian).
COUSIN
Ali Bhai, sorry to disturb you at this
time but Zaki and me wanted to tell you about what Qudsiya showed us.
ZAKI
Tell them the truth na.
COUSIN
Well I caught her with this.
The Cousin turns her mobile to Rashida and Ali. On it; it has a full frontal nudes of Erum. The family look embarrassed.
COUSIN
Apparently some boy was sent it by
another boy.
RASHIDA
Ya Allah. Ya Allah. What are we going
to do with these girls. Why the hell can’t you control them. God knows how many know. I feel like throttling them.
Ali is silent and sits down. His head in his hands he looks bereft. Rashida walks over and runs her hand over his hair. The relatives bid a subdued goodbye and leave. The house is quite.
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Then Ali burst into sobs.
INT. LOUNGE NEXT DAY
ALI decides to go and see his daughters and SHAZIA and give them a piece of his mind. He is very angry. They are all (except ZUBIYA) sat in the lounge.
ERUM
I can’t explain. Yes, I made a
mistake. But we’ve dealt with it.
ALI
You have made a hash of raising these
girls. It’s a fucking mess. You only send them to me when its dire.
SHAZIA I’m their mother.
ALI Then act like it.
SHAZIA
I haven’t? Is that what you’re saying?
Its me who's been picking and dropping them. Its Simon who's been forking out the money when they need anything. You think your child maintenance bullshit actually covers everything.
ALI
I pay a fair amount. And sorry if its
that much of an issue you know I’d have them. Just give them to me.
ERUM
Guys I am in the room you know.
Ali gets up and turns around and slaps Erum on the
slap is very hard and Erum stumbles back with her hand on her face. Shazia rushes towards her and hugs her tight. Ali gets up close and shouts in ERUMS ear.
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face. The
ALI
You cannot behave like this. Do you
think this is OK?
Erum gives a muffled reply while Shazia is burying her face in her bosom.
ERUM
ZUBIYA is standing on the landing hearing everything shes slumps to the floor and leans her head against the bannister and tears roll down her face.
It now becomes quiet downstairs and Erum then opens the door and starts walking up the stairs quietly.
INT. LOUNGE - SAME DAY
ALI
How could you not tell me the extent
of things.
SHAZIA
Cause I know you couldn’t hack it.
ALI You’re so so wrong.
SHAZIA
And this isn’t an example of your
handling skills?
ALI
And is this an example of your
parenting skills?
Sorry.
INT. CORRIDOR - SAME DAY
Just stop.
SHAZIA
ALI
So what is going on?
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SHAZIA
Its been hard. The girls are hard
work. Erum started going out, at first it was Mum can I just go to the park. I mean fuck we live in a village this isn’t the urban sprawl so I thought OK.
ALI
What and it became a habit.
SHAXIA
Yep, she was out nearly every day
after school. I checked her work on firefly and she was handing it in so I though fair play just leave her to it. Even Simon said and he’s much more though on them then I am.
ALI Then what?
SHAZIA
I think Erum got weird after she
starting hanging out with Emily
Emily?
ALI
SHAZIA
Just this girl at school. Her parents
are divorced
ALI So are we.
SHAZIA
No but her mothers a real low life.
Shes always out; just leaves the kid. Neglected child. So I think Erum looked at her freedom and thought I want some of that. She started challenging me. It was a bloody night mare.
ALI And Zubi?
SHAZIA
Some stuff happened at school about
boys teasing her
Why?
ALI
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SHAZIA
Cause you know how she is.
How?
Weird.
But she’s very clever.
ALI SHAZIA ALI
SHAZIA
I know. The teachers just called me in
when all that shit happened with the jeans but to be honest she seems fine after the Olanzapene.
ALI
You realize that medication is like a
hammer to the head. Its serious shit.
SHAZIA
Well at least she seems more level.
ALI And Erum.
SHAZIA
Well there are a few things I found
out and basically I got the police involved.
ALI
What? Why didn't you tell me?
SHAZIA I was handling it.
ALI
Is this what you call handling?
SHAZIA
They carried out an investigation and
they found out that Erum was being naughty. It wasn’t the boys fault.
ALI
You always just do what ever you want.
You’ve never listened to me. You think this move to the countryside has been good?
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SHAZIA
Well it would have been far worse in
London.
They are both silent and look out the window.
ALI
You need to just give me the girls,
that’s the best way.
SHAZIA
You know I won’t. Why do you always
talk about that.
ALI
You’ve really fucked things up. You
never taught them a thing. Nimaz, roza anything.
SHAZIA
So its a religious thing.
ALI
No it’s about giving them a family.
Some moral code to at least try and meet. You think you living with a gora and all this shit has helped.
And you?
SHAZIA
ALI
What about me. I tried my fucking
best.
SHAZIA
Giving the bare minimum and barely
seeing them is not your fucking best.
ALI
What’s the point. You just won’t
listen.
They are both quiet now and Ali’s phone starts to flash. It is Rashida. Ali bids goodbye and leaves. The house is quiet now and Shazia returns to the kitchen.
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We see time lapse and the scene turns to a sunny holiday
Zubiya and Erum are in the back of the car while Simon is driving and Shazia is in the passenger seat. Erum sticks her head out the window and smiles into the sun. Zubiya looks dark and quiet. She is itching multiple small razor cuts on her arm. She has been self harming.
K Mum!
Bye
Simon and Shazia leave the house with empty supermarket bags. They are calm and happy. Out for a day of food shopping.
INT. HALLWAY - EARLY EVENING - SAME DAY
SHAZIA
MY BABY. WHY. WHY WHY DID YOU DO THIS.
INT. HALLWAY - DAY
Bye Zubi. See you later.
SHAZIA ZUBIYA SIMON
Shazia is wailing and screaming loudly. Simon runs
stairs. The ambulance and police cars screech to a
outside. In the distance we can see the commotion.
In is early evening in the village and we see Erum
distance walking home. Oblivious about what she will see and what has happened.
ZUBIYA (V.O.)
I can’t say I wanted to go like that
but I just couldn’t take life anymore. Sorry. I’m really sorry Mum.
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up the halt
in the
END OF SHOW.
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