From Unnoticeable to Unskippable: AEC hooks that stop the scroll
Mark Randall Magsipoc
Helping AEC Pros get more projects by crafting contents that people actually wants to read |AEC Copywriter| Construction Project Manager| Architectural Designer| Book a free Content Audit
Let’s be honest social media is a battlefield.
There’s so much content flying around that people barely stop to read anything.
Hi there. Mark here again.
Here's the hard truth...Your AEC content needs to grab attention fast!
You’ve got about three seconds (maybe less!) to catch someone’s attention before they scroll away.
That’s where hooks come in.
A hook is the first thing your audience sees.
It is the opening line that grabs them and makes them think, Wait… tell me more.
A great hook makes people pause, pay attention, and feel curious enough to keep reading.
And here’s the best part...hooks come in different styles!
Depending on what you want to achieve, you can use one or mix a few together. Here are some of the most powerful ones:
1?? Open loop – Leave a question unanswered so people feel the need to read more.
2?? Bandwagon effect – Show that everyone’s doing it, and they won’t want to miss out.
3?? Storytelling – Start with a mini-story to draw people in.
4?? Social proof – Use testimonials or numbers to build trust.
5?? Contrarian statement – Say something unexpected that challenges common beliefs.
6?? Fear of missing out (FOMO) – Make them feel they need to act now.
7?? Familiar faces – Mention well-known people or brands to create instant recognition.
8?? Identity – Speak directly to your audience by making them feel seen.
Now that we know what hooks are, let’s take things a step further.
We’re not just talking about theory here.we’re going to look at real examples from AEC creators who know how to stop the scroll.
We’ll analyze real hooks from their post, see what makes them work, and learn how you can apply the same strategies to your own content.
Whether it’s a bold statement, a relatable story, or a question that sparks thought, friendly, informative, or cheeky, these hooks from these AEC creators k pull their audience in from the very first line down to the last letter of their post.
Ready? Lets dive right shall we!
First of is this hook from Josh Nieves that combines Contrarian Statement and Identification elements.
Why is it effective?
It challenges the status quo which resonated hard to his audience. The contrast between doing construction management and doing the work it self made his audience hooked and engage to his post.
It’s short, direct, and thought-provoking. By contrasting two different skill sets, it sparks discussion, making readers either agree or defend their stance. Perfect for engagement!
Next is this hook from Donella Olson, CKBR that uses Open Loop and Storytelling hooks.
Why is it effective?
It draws readers in with an intriguing, almost cryptic phrase that sparks curiosity, compelling them to read further.
As the message unfolds, it transitions into a relatable reflection on focus and mindset, making it both engaging and thought-provoking.
The visual elements enhance the impact, reinforcing the message seamlessly.
This post from Jesus (Jesse) Hernandez primarily uses Storytelling with elements of Social Proof and Identification.
Why It’s Effective
Readers want to know what happened when he asked for cookies.
This subtly suggests that asking for what you want (whether cookies or something bigger) can lead to surprising results which is relatable.
The casual phrasing (“Sometimes, all you gotta do is ask??”) makes it feel friendly and easy to read.
Also the audience’s response to his call serves as social proof, reinforcing his credibility.
Another example from Josh Nieves that uses contrarian statement and Identity because it challenges a common belief and is relatable.
Why is it effective?
It disrupts conventional thinking, making people curious and eager to engage. Readers will likely comment their own opinions or keep reading to find out the real solution.
It grabs attention by disrupting expectations. Many companies believe small perks like pizza parties improve employee morale, but the post immediately shuts that down.
This sparks curiosity and even debate, compelling readers to continue. The second line reinforces the point with a powerful contrast, making it memorable.
By implying there’s a better way to earn loyalty, it sets up the audience to crave the solution,encouraging engagement and discussion.
This version of Contrarian Statement and Identity hook from Josh Luebker. challenges readers by the bold statement “Money isn’t everything.”
Why is it effective?
Calling out “self-righteous people” provokes curiosity and debate, making it highly engaging.
It’s effective because it disrupts expectations, triggers strong opinions, and encourages interaction, whether readers agree or disagree.
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By calling out self-righteous people, it subtly implies that the reader should take a side. No one wants to be perceived as na?ve or out of touch.
Many people know firsthand that money does matter, whether for security, opportunity, or freedom. This hook validates those experiences, making it relatable.
A hook like this sets the stage for a post about financial reality, workplace loyalty, or compensation, making the reader curious to continue.
This great post from AJ Waters that uses Open Loop and Contrarian Statement is an eye catcher.
Why is it effective?
This hook is effective because it sparks curiosity with an open-ended debate while challenging conventional thinking.
The question invites discussion, and the contrarian angle fuels engagement. Plus, the breathtaking photo of the spire adds visual impact, stopping readers mid-scroll.
It’s the perfect mix of intrigue, controversy, and eye-catching content.
How about this post from Stefanie Couch ? This post uses a Contrarian Statement and Bandwagon Effect hook.
Why is it effective?
This hook works because it challenges conventional wisdom while presenting a new perspective.
It grabs attention by debunking a common belief and immediately provides a solution (“Pros in construction can leverage LinkedIn to grow”), making it both engaging and actionable. ??
This hook challenges assumptions while providing a clear alternative perspective.It subtly encourages action.
If others in construction are benefiting, why shouldn’t the reader?
The mention of tech and marketing for growth positions Stefanie as an expert who helps businesses succeed.
The structure moves from disrupting a belief → offering proof → suggesting an opportunity, making it persuasive and compelling.
Another example is Neil Sutton's post that uses an Open Loop and Storytelling hook.
This immediately creates curiosity. Readers want to know: What was the idea? It’s an unfinished thought, which makes them more likely to keep reading.
Why is it effective?
This is the essence of an Open Loop, it teases information without revealing it immediately.
The post sets a scene many people relate to having random but insightful thoughts in the shower so it feels natural.
This makes it feel personal and engaging. When people relate to a story, they are more likely to pay attention.
“Wash. Rinse. Repeat.” is a well-known phrase, reinforcing an easy-to-remember concepts its simple and memorable.
I also love how Neil induced some humor in the visual to make this post appealing.
Take this post by Zach White which uses an Open Loop and Contrarian Statement hook.
Why is it effective?
It grabs attention with a bold, short statement and disrupts conventional thinking.
Engineers, the target audience, are naturally drawn in, eager to find out why their usual approach might be limiting them.
Here's another example from Stefanie Couch that uses a Fear of Missing Out (FOMO) and Social Proof hook.
Why is it effective?
It positions AI adoption as a competitive advantage while making readers question whether they’re keeping up. The mention of working with building industry companies adds credibility, reinforcing expertise.
How about this post from John "Goose" Dunham This post primarily uses Bandwagon Effect and Storytelling hooks and brilliant use of Familiar face.
Why is it effective?
It hooks the reader with familiarity (Rocky, history, teamwork), builds anticipation, and ends with thought-provoking questions. This structure keeps engagement high while subtly connecting to the author’s mission.
Anyway who doesn't love rocky? I know I do!
Final Thought
Great content starts with a great hook.
It’s what grabs attention and keeps people reading. The right hook can mean the difference between being ignored and sparking real engagement.
Try these strategies, experiment with different styles, and refine your approach.
You’ll be surprised at how much more visibility, engagement, and opportunities come your way.
In the next edition, we’ll dive even deeper into hooks.
We will break down different types and showing you how to craft them effectively.
For now, keep testing, keep learning, and most importantly, keep writing. Your next viral post could be just one great hook away!
That's all for now. Chao!
Being the person I needed when I was younger . Design-Build Remodeler . Licensed Building Contractor . Expert Architectural Designer . Certified Kitchen & Bath Remodeler
3 周Fun! Thanks for the highlight! I feel so special to be called out by you, Mark! Thanks for ALWAYS providing so much clear value!
Trainer for the Trades, making Construction a relationship rich environment while boosting execution in the field and the office??
3 周Dang bro! the breakdown you gave me is pretty damn flattering. and I wish I was that calculated with my posts??
Architect | Ghostwriter & Coach to Architectural Product Reps
3 周Thanks, Mark, for including my post with this great group of industry experts! I always appreciate your support. And this is such a good breakdown of the hook examples.
Founder of "The 5 Pillars of a Profitable Subcontractor" designed for $15M revenue and under - Construction Subcontractor Expert
3 周I love contrarian but I like to call them death hooks because picking sides usually means someone’s choosing not to agree which makes them less likely to work with me. ?? That said, I’ve done pretty good because the people I do work with are my ideal clients which I credit to the death hooks!
Elevating Construction Professionals | Career Growth, Leadership & Workforce Development | IBEW Master Electrician | Farm Founder
3 周I appreciate you brother! Than you for all the support. Keep going ??