The Day I Became a Better Writer (thanks to Scott Adams)
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The Day I Became a Better Writer (thanks to Scott Adams)

I went from a bad writer to a good writer after reading ONE blog post from Scott Adams.

Scott is the creator of the amazing Dilbert comic....and predicted everything about Trump's election 2 years in advance, publicly

As a trained hypnotist and persuasion expert, he showed that persuasion = prediction.

So here are his simple tips that will make you a better writer.

Business writing is about clarity and persuasion. The key is keeping things simple

Simple writing is persuasive. 

A good argument in five sentences influences more people than a brilliant argument in a hundred sentences.  

Simple means getting rid of extra words. 

Don’t write, “He was very happy” when you can write “He was happy.”

Words like “very” add nothing. Prune your sentences.

Humor writing is a lot like business writing. It needs to be simple. The main difference is in the choice of words.

For humor, don’t say “drink” when you can say “swill.” 

For business, don't say "swill" when you can say "drink". 

Your first sentence needs to grab the reader.

Go back and read the first sentence of this blog. I rewrote it a dozen times (just like Scott did in his). It makes you curious. That’s the key.

Simple means short sentences.

Avoid putting multiple thoughts in one sentence. Readers aren’t as smart as you’d think.

Learn how brains organize ideas.

Readers comprehend “the boy hit the ball” quicker than “the ball was hit by the boy.”

Both sentences mean the same, but it’s easier to imagine the object (the boy) before the action (the hitting).

All brains work that way. (Notice how it didn’t say, “That is the way all brains work”?)

That’s it.

You just learned 80% of the rules of good writing.

Thank you Scott Adams.

Scott has an exciting new book coming out. I'll be doing a video on it so be sure to pre-order it on Amazon. BE SURE TO FOLLOW #MINDLOOM on LinkedIn for upcoming book reviews.

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Lawand Molla

I help surgeons and patients by providing clinical insights for designing intraoperative ultrasound | Medical Device Design Control | User and Product Insights

5 年

awesome article Omar M. Khateeb thanks for sharing, I think you read minds! I just needed such guidance! appreciate it!

Omar M. Khateeb

Helping Medtech Grow Sales Pipeline & Find Investors Using Social Media |??? Host of MedTech's #1 Podcast | Proud Husband & Father | Avid Reader | Jiu Jitsu @Carlson Gracie | Mentor | Coach

5 年

Thank you all for the kind messages. Those who asked, you can follow #MindLoom?on LinkedIn or just follow me for the weekly book reviews. Ill be reviewing Scott Adams?new book "Loser Think" once it comes out. Here's my video from last year on his book "Win Bigly" where he shows how he predicted the 2016 election outcomes almost 2 years in advance.?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Drhhzxhbfz8&t=10s

David Hayter

Technical Writer (Mechanical) at BHP

5 年

There are technical writers...and then there are technical writers. There is a marked difference between a tertiary trained technical writer or one who deliberately studies to gain a tertiary degree in technical communications and a technical writer who is an ex-tradie, engineer or administrator, or somebody that has somehow stumbled into technical writing. The difference can be seen in how a professional writer applies their expertise to sentence structure, procedural development and lineal development. Then, there are all the little things that a tertiary trained writer knows such as the arrangement of fore matter and back matter, page numbering, font choice etc., to make the document look professional and become an effective and functional tool for the end user. Our ‘highly trained’ scenario technical writer might not be as highly trained as she thinks she is...or she could be and Dilbert hasn’t got the faintest idea what he’s talking about...he is an engineer...but then again there are some competent engineers...somewhere.

Masaites Derek

Experienced Territory Account Manager skilled at building profitable relationships for the vendor and client

5 年

I agree fully with keeping it simple and enrolling the reader with a good opening statement

Joseph Lee

Trainer, Speaker, and Writer (not an industry leader, not particularly powerful, and not a bestselling author)

5 年

Most Linked-In posts are a waste of time.? Yours wasn't. ? Thanks!

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