BlueCat Screenplay Competition #3

Dear BlueCat Writer, 

Thanks so much for entering the 2019 BlueCat Screenplay Competition. For two decades, we have been providing feedback to everyone who submits their script to us, and you’ll find your written analysis below. 

Archive #345

Constance

Reader #9223 

What did you like about this script? 

Constance has an interesting and entertaining character at its core. It’s fun - and horrifying - watching Constance manipulate people and commit acts of evil. She is also more complicated than she first appears, specifically in her relationship with the Culls, particularly Josh. Their relationship adds a layer of depth to Constance’s character. It also adds more interpersonal conflict to the script - Constance has several external battles with teachers and police officers, but she also has an internal battle as she tries to suppress her most evil instincts. 

The climax of the screenplay is exciting. It does a good job of escalating the tension as Constance grows more and more powerful. There are creative moments of violence, like when Constance steers a helicopter into a building, and when she makes glass fall from a building to kill her attackers. These final pages of the script are well-paced. The story races to its conclusion before ending on a more tender moment between Constance and Josh.