9 tips for plain English report writing
Spotting plain English in a corporate report can be like finding Waldo! It’s because people often fear that presenting complex ideas simply, makes them look stupid. But, making information accessible is smart. In fact, it’s the whole point of communication. If your reader will need a dictionary to get through the first paragraph, it’s time for a rethink. Be a straight shooter. Albert Einstein was on to something when he said, “everything should be as simple as possible but not one bit simpler.”
2. Less is more
Learn to edit. Decide what you’ll focus on and align that with your company’s key messages and brand. Reports are much easier to read (and digest) if they tell a story, are well-structured and have something interesting to say. You cannot be all things to all people, so make content choices. Sand. Line. Drawn.
3. Be short, be simple and be human?
Write as though you’re looking your reader in the eye. Use ‘I’, ‘me’, ‘we’, ‘you’, ‘us’; speaking to them in clear, conversational English. Don’t talk about ‘the customer’. And, since you (hopefully) avoid corporate speak with your family, don’t inflict it on readers either. Instead of facilitating, use make it easier. Talk about ideas, not paradigms. Don’t write utilise, try use. And never request the status of a deliverable if you’re just wondering when dinner is.?
4. Unnecessary words and phrases
A common failing in report writing is the use of unnecessary words or rambling phrases. Consider every single word and decide if it helps your message or tone. If it doesn’t, wave goodbye.
Delete clutter like this (in bold) below…
5. Bullet points
These are:
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When the bullet points aren’t full sentences (like above), begin each in lower case and only use a period at the end.
6. Avoid jargon?
As an expert in your field, you can become unconsciously attached to jargon. It’s next-level corporate speak and comes with ‘exclusive’ acronyms (always spell these out the first time you use them) and a sense of professional ‘fitting-in’. Jargon serves a purpose if you’re communicating with like-minded peers about micro-organisms, the finer points of airport design or the perfumed aroma of a wine. But, outside your realm (especially in public-facing reports), you should aim to hold people’s attention, not put them to sleep. The Economist?is written for intelligent people and its style guide opens with:?
The first requirement of?The Economist?is that it should be readily understandable. Clarity of writing usually follows clarity of thought. So, think what you want to say, then say it as simply as possible.?
7. Improve readability?
Descriptive headings and call-outs improve readability and aid skimming and scanning. Use as many headings as you need, but make sure they logically signpost and divide the narrative and ideas underneath them.
8. Take the pain out of numbers?
The readability of some annual reports comes to a crashing halt with numbers. Most of this data is required, but a little bit of thought goes a long way. Bring in some color and movement. Statistics can tell great visual stories. Use infographics, charts, tables and icons to give them context and make them more engaging. Graphic elements also help break pages into bite-sized chunks, making it easier for readers to absorb information.?
9. We’re done – plain (English) and simple
It’s all downhill from here. Just remember, when you write a report:?
A final tip: Read your writing and ask yourself if it sounds like something you’d say. Dare to read it aloud – but not too loud.
Writer, copywriter, copyeditor @ Perfectly Write | Writing, Editing, Training
9 个月I like the metaphor of 'wading through treacle' for reading overwritten text; sometimes finding the meaning just gives you a headache. Reading plain English on the other hand is effortless - with all your mental energy available to think about the content rather than disentangle the writing.
Copywriter & Content Specialist at VicTrack
10 个月On writing like you are addressing family - I once saw a presentation by Don Watson on public sector language. He asked the audience if we would ever write a Mother's Day card to our 'Dear valued mother.'
Consultant and editor for accessible, plain language communication; Writing that serves diversity, equity, and inclusion.
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10 个月"Spotting plain English in a corporate report can be like finding Waldo! It’s because people often fear that presenting complex ideas simply, makes them look stupid." From "On Writing Well: The Classic Guide to Writing Nonfiction" (1976) by William Zinsser: "Still, plain talk will not be easily achieved in corporate America. Too much vanity is on the line. Managers at every level are prisoners of the notion that a simple style reflects a simple mind. Actually, a simple style is the result of hard work and hard thinking; a muddled style reflects a muddled thinker or a person too arrogant, or too dumb, or too lazy to organize his thoughts."
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10 个月Excellent lessons, as always